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caizleyl - all messages by user

8/24/2017 4:30:15 PM
Hello, i'm a new member	Hi I'm Lorna. I have decided to try poetry soup as i've heard great things. Much of my work is on another site but I thought i'd try somewhere new. I absolutely love writing, I spend most of my time doing so poetry is something i'm really passionate about but I am still a novice and I have a lot to learn. I often find inspiration from others. I love the work of Plath, Frost, Dickinson and Byron and so many others
8/27/2017 3:25:44 PM
Wavedance..Id love your feedback	Lace waves lap tender shore Brush away layered sand Erode this sodden land Revealing something raw A hypnotic deep trance Horizon shrouded day Clouds tumbling away As the salty waves dance As the salty waves dance
9/13/2017 10:42:36 AM
Wavedance..Id love your feedback	Hi this is not in anyway and attempt at trance poetry...Just freestyle, but thank you for the suggestion. The refrain is about the salty waves and the salty tears that fall when emotions hit their peak. I appreciate your feedback...Thanks
9/22/2017 4:43:22 AM
Wavedance..Id love your feedback	Thanks for your feedback, The poem is about emotion, how it comes in waves, it erodes us down, the numbness as we watch the dark horizon, to finally let the tears fall and find release. This is what I was hoping to construe.
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