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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
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2/24/2021 5:56 AM - raisalar
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Ways to improve your poetry. Post your techniques, tips, and creative ideas how to write better.
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2/26/2021 6:20 PM - Yonathan Asefaw
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I just need to talk...
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Self-Publishing
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My Book(s)
Are you a published poet? If so, tell us about your book.
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3/4/2021 2:43:58 AM
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Topic:
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3/2/2021 9:19:27 PM
Topic:
What is your style?

Yonathan Asefaw
Posts: 6
Rondeau's, Epics, Ballads, Senryu's. And I write Epics.
edited by LoomingSun on 3/2/2021
3/2/2021 7:20:23 PM
Topic:
The Tax-Payer

Yonathan Asefaw
Posts: 6
The burly man had debt to pay.
Living in his snowy city there
he stood waiting for the
tax-payer to pay up.
He leaves out a number
and address to pay up for
tomorrow. I dare not know
what he will do next.
But in the snow, he waits
for his next hunt.
He adds that work penned
like an epic needs to be
addressed to the tax-payer.
He continues to scribble languages
in his pen, the day looming
over to night. A cycle of darkness
begins and he sits in his home
waiting for his debt. He will pay
he says, and when the moon
comes avalanching to sunlight.
He waits in his flat.
The tax-payer is around here somewhere
he says.
And he wonders this for a time.
The man with his crewcut face
and crewcut hair scratches his
head wondering where he is now.
But the day ahead looms again.
He continues to wait for his
payment, he hopes someone answers.


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3/2/2021 7:04:10 PM
Topic:
A Canadian Goose Landed in My Throat

Yonathan Asefaw
Posts: 6
This was a beautiful read! I think it works well when it comes to imagery but it was a bit tedious, and almost jarred me when reading the poem due to it being too long. Is this an epic poem by the way? It rhymes (which is nice) It is also repetitive which I don't know why. I think you can cut it down though, make it shorter.
3/2/2021 11:05:47 AM
Topic:
A Canadian Goose Landed in My Throat

Jennifer Cahill
Posts: 11
Today, I feel her-
she alerts her soul-mates, their storm-
colored bodies. She..cries,

her wings contracted,
a honk mingled with a " I am
amongst you", and chimes

so dampened, they toll
like Hemingway's Bell. A Goose,
Canadian- a wife-

is in my dried throat
this morning, within the drops
of the shower; a peal,

but a high note "oppressed".
The fat, so off-key with the song
of my being, folds

into pastel wings.
They are light, like an American
shore bleached by the Suns.

My wet, soft blonde arms
reach for Irish sea-tints: a bar,
and a rainforest (shampoo).

To cleanse coffee oils.
My hands rub against the porousness.
The bouying scents,

like the sparks of incense,
sink into my entity.
And the shrine could flood.

My hair twists like rope,
enshrouds my loosened countenance
that is a burnt rose.

The sheen of this skin
shines in the yellow watt's glow.
I sing; I lift the grass-

green towel to dry.
I grab the faded face cloth,
the hue of a weary

field, barren but for the gold
butter-cup weeds of the longest
days. I toss the tough

machine-threaded cotton,
to FLY..off of my body.
My damp hair is night

colored; blonde wings clipped
at birth. Yet, within the misty
brushstrokes of morning,

beneath a gentle
wedding-white sky with lilac
lace, she may feast, hushed.



Today, I feel her-
she alerts her soul-mates, their storm-
colored bodies. She..cries,

her wings contracted,
a honk mingled with a " I am
amongst you", and chimes

so dampened, they toll
like Hemingway's Bell. A Goose,
Canadian- a wife-

is in my dried throat
this morning, within the drops
of the shower; a peal,

but a high note "oppressed".
The fat, so off-key with the song
of my being, folds

into pastel wings.
They are light, like an American
shore bleached by the Suns.

My wet, soft blonde arms
reach for Irish sea-tints: a bar,
and a rainforest (shampoo).

To cleanse coffee oils.
My hands rub against the porousness.
The bouying scents,

like the sparks of incense,
sink into my entity.
And the shrine could flood.

My hair twists like rope,
enshrouds my loosened countenance
that is a burnt rose.

The sheen of this skin
shines in the yellow watt's glow.
I sing; I lift the grass-

green towel to dry.
I grab the faded face cloth,
the hue of a weary

field, barren but for the gold
butter-cup weeds of the longest
days. I toss the tough

machine-threaded cotton,
to FLY..off of my body.
My damp hair is night

colored; blonde wings clipped
at birth. Yet, within the misty
brushstrokes of morning,

beneath a gentle
wedding-white sky with lilac
lace, she may feast, hushed.
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Topic:
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john adem
Posts: 8
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Topic:
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john adem
Posts: 8
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Topic:
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2/27/2021 4:32:58 PM
Topic:
A moment of silence

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Posts: 2
woah. truly speechless. that was beautiful..
2/27/2021 11:27:57 AM
Topic:
A moment of silence

collins marasha
Posts: 1
woooooooooooow!! you nailed. a great poem
2/27/2021 10:57:59 AM
Topic:
A little something about me

Yonathan Asefaw
Posts: 6
Hello Jim! Nice to meet you.
2/26/2021 6:20:11 PM
Topic:
Have you thought about making chapbooks

Yonathan Asefaw
Posts: 6
I think it works, I am currently composing a chapbook myself, I used to have two that I was producing but I think one would be enough.



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