not spaghetti this time, but
noodle alphabet
lovelier than couple love
missing the miso
his boyf wouldn’t let
him purchase –
daft!
spaghetti, meatloaf, burgers
put me in chili
salt and pepper seasoning
Maid-rites, sloppy Joe’s
super delicious
Iowa
beef
mashed smashed scalloped au gratin
tasty potatoes
my favorite vegetable
with salt and pepper
seasoned and sassy
buttery
hot
meatloaf with sugar topping
side of potatoes
marvelous combination
onions optional
bake for an hour
delicious
yum
Pineapple upside down cake
Brown sugared cherries
Hidden in cake pan bottom
Sugary and sweet
Pineapple tartness
Delicious
Cake
For Natasha, written: 08-23-2026
steamed, beheaded jumbo shrimp
deveined awful good
size clearly misunderstood
freeze burn soon seen
off tasting, dunked in
cocktail sauce
yum!
Under neon lights and polished floors,
Where innovation hums behind grand doors,
A city of brands in banners dressed,
Each booth a stage, each pitch a quest.
Voices rise in a rhythmic flow,
Of deals to spark and ideas to grow,
From handcrafted builds to digital dreams,
Every corner bursts with vibrant themes.
Designs that dazzle, bold and bright,
Structures rising in a single night,
Stories told through shape and space,
Each exhibit a brand’s embrace.
Footsteps echo on carpeted aisles,
Strangers meeting with knowing smiles,
Cards exchanged, connections made,
Opportunities bloom in the trade show parade.
Screens flicker with future visions,
Products born from bold decisions,
From modular forms to custom art,
Each booth reflects a beating heart.
And when the lights begin to fade,
And the grand displays start to wane,
What lingers still beyond the view—
Are the ties we built, the dreams we grew.
For a trade show is more than display,
It’s where tomorrow finds its way.
Ai does all the rest' so by far; true wrie offs
Stand all times tests.'
No meat ever tasted like
Grannie’s home-baked ham.
Sweetest right next to the bone.
Savory some say.
I like it most with
a side of –
more!
Mother's cooking wasn't good -
she either burnt or
undercooked. Even sand-
wiches were awful.
Having said that, my
cooking's the
same!
Succulent rainbow dessert
lavishly layered
in large clear bowls and goblets,
Fine crushed ice with milk,
ice cream scoops on top
of all sweets.
Yum!
Blends of apples and raisins
midst crisp pears, berries
God-blest nutritious nuts like
walnuts and almonds
whipped with honeyed cream…
healthy snack
thanks*!
1Thessalonians 5:18 In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you.
November 22, 2025
2nd place, "A Favorite food dish..." Epulaeryu Writing Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 10/18/2025
Aromatic crispy duck,
Tangy hoi sin sauce.
Stacks of Chinese pancake wraps,
Spring onions mixed,
With cucumber sticks.
Fingers licked
Quick.
10 / 11 / 2025.
My favourite is lamb roast
Seasoned with garlic
Surrounded by roast veggies
Crisp spuds are a must
Served with mint sauce- and
Brown gravy
Yum!
the shell softly cracks to spoon
letting steam twirl up
yellow yolk gleams like sunrise
firm fluid just gelled-
yet when whites still weep
its yucky
gunk
Introduction
A dish arrives twice in an Epulaeryu: first as something imagined through aroma, texture, color, heat, and taste, then as a burst of feeling at the close. The pleasure for readers lies in watching how quickly a poet can make food vivid before the poem contracts toward its emphatic final word. Because the space is tight, every choice becomes conspicuous. A precise verb can suggest an entire kitchen, while one crisp sound can make a crust, snap, or sizzle almost audible.
Read several Epulaeryus side by side and the range of possible approaches becomes clearer. One poet may linger over preparation; another may concentrate on the first bite, a festive table, or the comfort attached to a familiar dish. Voices can be playful, ceremonious, nostalgic, sensuous, or exuberant. Some writers build anticipation through a sequence of details, while others begin with abundance and then narrow toward a personal reaction. Even poems about similar foods can differ sharply in pace, diction, and emotional temperature.
An isolated example shows one solution to the form's pressures. A collection reveals the choices behind that solution. As you browse the community poems, notice which details survive compression, how each line contributes a fresh morsel of perception, and whether the ending feels prepared rather than merely attached. Reading beyond the first example also helps distinguish technical recognition from artistic distinction: the most engaging poems do not simply fit food into a pattern; they make the pattern resemble appetite itself-gathering impressions, intensifying desire, and finishing with concentrated delight.
Reading Guide
Reading an Epulaeryu closely means attending to the relationship between sensory abundance and verbal economy. The poem has little room for explanation, so ingredients, actions, sounds, and emotional associations must carry more than their literal meanings. Compare several poets' approaches before deciding what the form can do. One writer may create a miniature tasting experience; another may make the dish a doorway into celebration or memory while keeping the food central. The strongest comparisons ask not only whether a poem is recognizable in form, but also how its compression shapes anticipation and satisfaction.
- Trace the sensory route. Notice whether the poem moves through aroma, sight, sound, texture, temperature, and taste, or relies chiefly on one sense. Sensory variety can make a small poem feel abundant. Ask: Which poem gives the fullest physical experience with the fewest details?
- Watch the order of presentation. A poet might move from kitchen to plate, from appearance to first bite, or from ingredients to emotional response. That order creates a miniature narrative of appetite. Ask: Where does anticipation begin, and at what point does imagined tasting occur?
- Listen for edible sounds. Crisp consonants may suggest crunch or chopping, while liquids and long vowels can evoke melting, pouring, or richness. Sound is especially valuable when description must remain compressed. Ask: Does the language merely name a texture, or does it make that texture audible?
- Examine each line's contribution. The separate thoughts should accumulate rather than repeat the same praise in different words. A new action, image, ingredient, or sensation keeps the dish developing. Ask: If one line disappeared, what dimension of the food experience would be lost?
- Feel the accelerating close. As the available verbal space narrows, the poem can seem to quicken, sharpen, or gather pressure. Punctuation may reinforce or resist that movement. Ask: Does the approach to the final word feel like a rush, a pause before tasting, or a comic snap?
- Test the final exclamation. The closing word is small but carries the accumulated appetite and attitude of the poem. Generic enthusiasm can feel automatic; a carefully prepared choice can reinterpret everything before it. Ask: Is the ending inevitable, surprising, or insufficiently earned?
As you read the community poems, revisit the openings after reaching their endings. This backward glance reveals how effectively each poet planted the sensory and emotional conditions for the final burst.
Writing Tips
Approach an Epulaeryu as a miniature tasting menu rather than a container to be filled. Before counting anything, decide what the reader should experience: the hiss of frying, the softness beneath a browned surface, the fragrance released by a cut, or the anticipation surrounding a shared dish. Draft from appetite and observation first. The formal pressure should refine those perceptions, not replace them.
- Choose a subject with a sensory center. A broad category such as dessert or dinner often encourages vague praise. A particular dish, serving moment, or stage of preparation supplies sharper material. Select something you can describe through concrete changes-bubbling, folding, glazing, cracking, steaming-or through a distinctive contrast of textures.
- Build a private sensory inventory. List colors, temperatures, aromas, textures, sounds, ingredients, utensils, and actions before drafting. Then choose only the details that intensify one another. This prevents the common beginner mistake of producing an ingredient list with no movement, atmosphere, or felt appetite.
- Give the poem a culinary progression. Decide whether it will travel from preparation to serving, surface to center, fragrance to taste, or observation to delight. The poem is brief, but it still benefits from development. When every line offers equal, unrelated praise, the close has nowhere to rise.
- Let compression improve the diction. If a phrase exceeds its space, do not immediately substitute a distorted sentence or filler word. Search for a stronger verb, a more exact noun, or an image that performs several tasks at once. Formal compliance becomes damaging when natural speech is sacrificed merely to preserve a weak detail.
- Make line boundaries meaningful. A line can present a complete sensory unit while also creating expectation for what follows. Place an appetizing noun, active verb, or revealing modifier where it receives emphasis. Avoid breaking a phrase so awkwardly that the reader notices the counting process more than the food.
- Match sound to mouthfeel. Read clusters of consonants and vowels as physical textures. Percussive language can animate chopping, crunching, or crackling; softer continuants can suggest cream, syrup, steam, or slow melting. Use these effects selectively, since excessive alliteration can turn genuine appetite into verbal decoration.
- Choose a voice with a reason to care. Enthusiasm need not sound identical in every poem. Delight may be childlike, teasing, grateful, sophisticated, surprised, or warmly nostalgic. Keep the dish in focus, but allow diction and rhythm to disclose who is eating and why this particular food matters.
- Earn the last word. Draft several possible endings instead of settling automatically for familiar reactions such as praise or approval. The best choice gathers the poem's sensory evidence into one concentrated response. It may confirm the prevailing tone or add a playful twist, but it should not introduce an emotion the preceding lines never prepared.
During revision, read the poem aloud at least twice: once slowly to test pronunciation and once at a natural speaking pace to test appetite, momentum, and tone. Mark every padded phrase, repeated idea, generic adjective, and tongue-stopping break. Then check the formal pattern after the language has become vivid. A final useful test is to hide the ending and ask a reader what emotional word the poem seems to invite; agreement suggests coherence, while an unexpected answer may reveal either productive surprise or insufficient preparation.
Interesting Facts
- Culinary vocabulary creates hidden difficulty. Ingredient names, borrowed food terms, and regional pronunciations do not always sound alike to every reader. A draft that appears exact on the page may behave differently aloud, making spoken testing particularly important for this form.
- The narrowing movement can produce more than speed. Shortening verbal space often accelerates the approach to the close, but careful punctuation can create hesitation, savoring, or suspense instead. The same architecture can therefore resemble quick appetite or a deliberate final taste.
- The smallest word may have the largest reach. Because the ending is so compressed and emphatic, readers often use it to reinterpret the preceding images. A playful close can make luxurious description humorous; a tender one can reveal that the pleasure involves memory as well as flavor.
- Taste alone is rarely enough. Food becomes more vivid when the poem recruits touch, sound, smell, sight, and temperature. An audible crust or rising steam can stimulate imagined appetite more effectively than several general claims that a dish is delicious.
- Positive feeling still permits tonal complexity. Enjoyment can contain impatience, ceremony, mischief, gratitude, comfort, or nostalgia. Experienced writers preserve the form's pleasure while varying the emotional route by which that pleasure is reached.
- Naming the dish is a strategic choice. An early name gives readers a clear frame for every detail; a delayed name can create a compact guessing game or reveal. Browse the poems in this collection to compare how timing changes curiosity and recognition.
- Multiple examples expose invisible decisions. Two poets can begin with similar foods yet emphasize entirely different actions, senses, voices, and endings. Reading several community interpretations shows that disciplined brevity does not require sameness.
Popular Themes
Subject matter and structure meet especially closely in an Epulaeryu because the poem must turn a food-centered experience into a rapid sequence of perceptions and then concentrate its feeling at the close. The possibilities below are literary opportunities, not statistical rankings of the community collection. Each works best when the dish remains tangible rather than becoming a mere excuse for a general meditation.
- A single irresistible dish. Close attention to one plate allows the poet to magnify crust, filling, sauce, spice, steam, or garnish. The compressed space rewards selection: a few exact features can make the whole dish present.
- Cooking as transformation. Dough rising, sugar caramelizing, vegetables softening, or oil beginning to sizzle provides built-in movement. Such changes help each line advance and give the poem a destination beyond repeated admiration.
- Family food and remembered comfort. A familiar recipe can carry affection without requiring a long backstory. One utensil, aroma, serving gesture, or customary ingredient may suggest the human context while preserving the poem's culinary focus.
- Celebration and communal tables. Holiday foods, birthday treats, picnics, and shared feasts naturally unite anticipation with exuberant closure. The challenge is to choose one edible center instead of crowding the poem with an entire occasion.
- Seasonal appetite. Summer fruit, autumn baking, winter soups, or fresh spring produce bring color, temperature, and atmosphere into a small space. Seasonality can make the final pleasure feel timely and embodied rather than abstract.
- Street food and meals away from home. Smoke, paper wrappers, crowded stalls, unfamiliar spices, and food eaten on the move offer energetic imagery. Careful specificity lets the poet convey setting through the dish without reducing a culture or place to decoration.
- Indulgence, temptation, and the first bite. Foods associated with craving suit the form's gathering pressure. A poet can delay tasting through visual and aromatic details, making the final reaction feel like release after restraint.
As you browse the community poems, compare works built around related subjects. Notice how one poet may make comfort quiet, another comic, and another ceremonial. Similar ingredients do not produce identical poems; sequence, voice, sound, and the chosen final response determine what kind of pleasure reaches the reader.
Editorial Insights
The central artistic tension of an Epulaeryu is between abundance and restriction. Food invites lavish description: layers of flavor, fragrance, color, texture, preparation, memory, and social meaning all compete for attention. The poem, however, can retain only a few of them. A technically recognizable draft may satisfy the pattern while sounding like trimmed prose or a list of complimentary adjectives. A memorable one treats limitation as an instrument of appetite. It selects details that intensify in sequence, allowing what is omitted to create anticipation.
Structure feels necessary when the poem's verbal contraction mirrors an emotional action. The reader may move from surveying a dish to approaching it, tasting it, and finally reacting; alternatively, the diminishing space may imitate impatience, savoring, comic suspense, or the mind's collapse into pure pleasure. In such cases, the closing exclamation is not decorative punctuation attached to a food description. It is the point toward which sound, image, pacing, and voice have been leaning. Editors notice when the last word gathers earlier details and when it merely announces enthusiasm that the poem has not made us feel.
Several weaknesses can interfere with that movement. Predictable praise leaves no discovery for the reader. Forced inversions and unnecessary modifiers expose the machinery of syllable management. Mechanical patterning makes each line seem interchangeable, while over-explanation spends precious space telling us that the food is enjoyable instead of presenting evidence through steam, spice, resistance, sweetness, or heat. At the opposite extreme, an underdeveloped draft may name a few ingredients and leap to its reaction before creating a sensory or emotional progression. Formal exactness cannot compensate for absent development.
Individuality remains visible through selection. One poet notices the knife's rhythm; another attends to melting, family ritual, visual arrangement, or the comic difficulty of waiting. Diction can suggest a speaker's age, mood, relationship to the dish, and degree of restraint without pushing food into the background. This is why comparing multiple community poems is so useful. Shared conventions establish a stable field, making small artistic decisions easier to perceive. Read beyond the first example and ask which poem changes your pace of reading, activates several senses, or makes its final word feel both surprising and unavoidable. Those effects, rather than compliance alone, mark the difference between a completed exercise and a poem with aftertaste.
Read, Write & Share
Read several Epulaeryus before settling on a favorite approach. Compare how community poets sequence preparation, aroma, texture, taste, and feeling, and notice which endings continue to resonate after the brief poem is over. A thoughtful comment might mention one sensory detail, sound pattern, tonal choice, or moment of acceleration that shaped your response.
Then choose a dish that invites close attention and try your own interpretation. Let the form sharpen your appetite for exact language, revise until the final exclamation feels earned, and publish the finished poem on PoetrySoup so other readers and writers can encounter another possibility within the shared design.
Collection Statistics
This collection contains 519 poems, providing many opportunities to compare how writers handle culinary imagery, compressed development, sound, voice, and emphatic closure. Some poets may follow the conventions closely, while others may adapt or challenge aspects of them in pursuit of a particular effect. Reading across the collection allows visitors to consider both formal recognition and the varied artistic choices that give each contribution its own flavor.
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