Dodoitsu Poems | Examples

Premium Member tea

the hearth flickers 'neath a pot
water swirls and tumbles round
dried leaves bloom within the clay
misty cup of calm

Premium Member Desire

Desire overcomes my fear
I ride to her through the night
Night’s coldness upon my face
Nothing can stop me


Premium Member Too Hot To Handle

 Lounging on the beach supine
    With Rayban sunglasses on.
    At last, summertime is here; 
             A hot one at that!

 The heat could roast a chicken;
        A sun too hot to handle!
           I am a corn on a cob; 
           My kernels popping!

Hey, friend, aren't you feeling this?
    You're a corn on the cob, too.
      I don't see you popping off!
           What's going on here?

My sweetheart

scarlet roses smiling pink
perfumed laughter of daisies
lustre painted peonies~
showed them my sweetheart.

Premium Member TANABATA by the Milky Way

blessed maiden by the stream
weaving raiments from the stars
apple of her father's eye
full of charm and grace

there lived one across the bank
across where the princess weaved
steering oxen through the grass
able, strong and brave

the princess and the cowherd
crossed paths by the Milky Way
a glance, a nod, and a wink
love then swept their feet

lost within each other's gaze,
the weaver's loom stopped her spin
oxen roamed the fields alone
order came apart

their love became a poison
the king thus bade the cowherd:
"depart henceforth, and return
where you once belonged!"

the lovers held their farewells
but the parting broke their hearts
and so the Milky Way's banks
filled up with their tears

the king, therefore, must relent
to give their love one more chance
for one bright eve they shall meet
at the magpie's bridge


Premium Member Tuckered and Tucked In-dodoitsu string

tuckered and tucked in with him
ebb and flow of pillow head
personalities have dreams
we walk on the sea

we see no sun, with eyes shut
lily pads and no frog legs
and the sky’s a blinding blue
our feet toss and turn

pebbles rise into the clouds
a curious sight, indeed
even in the darkest night
distressing whale song 

whistle salts breeze into face
we walk our separate ways
sleepy fits of temperament
hopeful peppermint

a couple buoys apart
harbor of port and starboard
ahoy, matey…don’t walk plank
drop splash to the deck

wakey…wakey…the seas wake
the blasting siren alarm
no one cares less where wave crests
it rests on the bed

that is the crumpled bed sheet
only need to straighten it
a boat left in the harbor
the sea’s now placid

Premium Member Strength in Losing

Strength in Losing

it’s easy being a winner
everything runs much smoother
losing is more difficult
loss is how we grow

Premium Member Spring Blossoms

Spring blossoms and crocuses
live briefly and pass quickly...
teaching us life lessons in
mute exhortation

True Love

as time goes by, love enlarges
like a beautiful green tree
full of sweet lovely roses 
true love never fade

Premium Member One Tough Goodbye

Poor child crying his eyes out;
Clutching on with vice-like grip...
Peeling her child off her legs;
Sad mom heads to work.

Premium Member Ashen Backdrop





bare the foliage of trees

 petals crumbling… split from bones

ghosts of maples hanging low,

ashen backdrop tilts

Hilly Cloud

On the head of Keokradong
I kissed the winter white cloud
Hugged with breaths of loneliness
Felt the reign of love

©Mahtab Bangalee 
11th January, 2025

Inadvertent Sign

From the hair of waif-like scent
On the petals of the earth
The red lips of sleeping sea
Becomes love emblem


©Mahtab Bangalee
9th January, 2025

Premium Member Overcast

when another day begins
with cold, grey, overcast skies
foreboding shivers the mind...
uncertainty looms

clouds may mirror my musings
but, nevertheless, I scan
the sky searching for golden
streaks and blue demesnes

Premium Member Winter Solstice

winter solstice arriving...
shortest day and longest night...
silent trees gather forces
for returning light

lighter, longer, brighter days
saunter through the winter gloom...
light triumphs over darkness
renewal awaits

Specific Types of Dodoitsu Poems

Definition | What is Dodoitsu in Poetry?

Poems Related to Dodoitsu

haiku, humor, japanese, love, paradelle, sijo, terzanelle,

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