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Marilyn.Newman
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5/24/2017 9:47:00 PM
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My Introduction!
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Hey Kevin
Welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a fun community to share poetry. I have eleven years of experience writing poetry myself. I'm just starting to publish all my poetry. I'm looking forward into reading your poetry. =)
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6/25/2017 11:29:03 PM
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My Hero
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You are the gentlemen who allowed me to love you endlessly. I chose you to become my soulmate, without you in my life I feel like a square. You don't have a minimal clue how much you mean to me. I care about you so much. There are times I gaze at the clouds through my window and see figures of a heart. When I look in the mirror, I see I cannot wait to encounter you once more and give you a neverending French kiss, one which will want to make you give me an enormous hug and squeeze me so tightly. I'm glad you became a part of my life, I'm excited for the beautiful years we will cherish together. Each year we will grow old together and age with wisdom and knowledge but united as one. Love didn't tare us apart. It made us stronger and brought us closer to one another. You've shown me how to embrace our relationship. When I do things, I only think of you. When I think about you. Nothing in this world matters but you. When I'm alone, I miss you so much I try not to have an emotional breaking down. When I'm in your arms, I feel like the most important woman in the universe. I am your queen, it is to me that you treat like a goddess. You treated me like a goddess which is why I cherish every moment Thanks to your gestures I am the woman that I am todayI'll never leave your side. I want our love to be eternal. An ongoing cycle that doesn't stop. In my eyes, you will forever be my husband. edited by Marilyn.Newman on 6/26/2017 edited by Marilyn.Newman on 6/26/2017
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6/25/2017 11:58:17 PM
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In Minor Need of Help
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If you're still looking for guidance within your confusion about the slam poem you need to create. Take a perfect example at the movie or TV show called Jane the Virgin. I hope this helps out.
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6/26/2017 10:27:07 AM
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My Hero
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Would anyone be kind enough and assist me on any corrections, grammar structure or include any ideas on how I can develop my poem and make it stronger, please? by Marilyn.Newman on 6/26/2017 edited by Marilyn.Newman on 6/26/2017
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