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3/26/2016 4:30:37 AM
Newbie	Hi, This is the first time I am putting forth my poems on any platform. I wrote several poems, but did not show to anyone. I am not trained in poetry writing. I write what seems beautiful to me. I am deeply religious, a proud Catholic and so many poems are about God. I am shy by nature; so please don't be offended if I am not around. I will appreciate any inputs, criticisms very much. Thanks.
3/26/2016 10:38:01 AM
I am bored of life	I am bored of life, there is no respite. The same misery everyday, from morning to night. Suffering is the purpose, suffering is the end. Evil is my neighbor, foolishness my friend. Enemies are many, supporters none. No one to intervene, by world, shunned. The people are a picture, on my wall they blend. I wait for my Father my cause to defend. Life is a prison with unseeable fence. In the hope of freedom, I pass my time dense. I am bored of life, there is no respite. The same misery everyday, from morning to night. edited by David G on 3/26/2016 edited by David G on 3/26/2016
3/28/2016 11:16:22 PM
I am bored of life	Bob_Atkinson wrote: Sounds like it's written by some person that has no time in grade, no time in service, and no purpose. Wait a few years, you'll find purpose in helping others and spending not so much time worrying selfishly about yourself. They said similar things to Jesus also. I will not hold you responsible for saying an obvious lie. You know the truth! Anyway I would appreciate your comments on my poem and not on my life. Remember I will always love you and I am not calling you a bad person.
4/1/2016 9:47:31 AM
Newbie	Michael_Spangle wrote: Welcome, Alok, to the Soup. You will find this a safe place, even for shy ones. Thank you Michael.
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