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4/3/2016 6:34:25 PM
Would like some feedback	It is not all Philosophical! Another afternoon being brave, chasing clouds down drifting earth embers for freedom. Grateful glances hurry humbly into imminent jubilee. Juxtaposed kindly, knives loosely lacerate my mind; never nearing opulent offers. Perhaps Philosophy's quiet quandary renders reservation so selfishly the technique underscores unusually valuable variations?! Why waste extreme excitement yawning, you zany zealot? edited by Lukas on 4/3/2016 edited by Lukas on 4/4/2016 edited by Lukas on 4/5/2016
6/10/2016 9:02:38 AM
Would like some feedback	Nice Andrea! That is what I was looking for! Thank you so much for spending time with your feedback. I was under the impression that abecedarian by form did not allow for extra words in between and was finding it difficult without the double alliteration. It sounds like you are saying I can be more creative with the form to capture the feelings and keep the essence of a timely flow in the write.
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