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5/11/2010 9:26:32 AM
My Independence Day The day dawned like any other day
time moving faster than I could
and me still not caring if time stopped altogether
I had no future, I only had yesterday
The dust of broken dreams floating in empty space
only served to remind me I had fallen from grace
with worn out excuses of being so misunderstood.

Then I found my long awaited answer
It came from above and it came from within
shocking me right back into the reality
I had hidden an emotional cancer
with my apathetic shield of armor called skin
It was finally the hour to forgive my sin
to let go of the past, learn to live again

I no longer need to follow my shadow
It can follow me if it can keep up the pace
I have a crystal clear view from my window
of my gratitude exploding in a splendid array
at being given a new chance to win my own race
I am at peace; for today is my independence day
5/11/2010 1:44:33 PM
How do I send someone an a Soup email? How do I send a member an email to their "Soup" email box? Do I need to be a premium member to do so?
5/11/2010 1:47:41 PM
How do I send someone an a Soup email? Never mind - I figured it out! Thanks anyway!
5/12/2010 1:15:06 PM
My Independence Day Thank you Catie for your kind remarks! I was wondering if I had the poetry form correct as to describe the form of this poem as "Free Verse"?
edited by kdominick on 5/12/2010
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