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KMitchell
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7/1/2015 5:39:21 PM
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Nature's Acts
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On my second read, I "got" the message of Katrina, as in the hurricane. Still, though, you lost me at '"K" is for kettle.' I think you could have ended it after the bit with the 'PEA GREEN BOAT', or perhaps an other concluding stanza.
Apart from that, weaving nursery rhymes (disturbing in their own right) with the historical catastrophe of Katrina was brilliant and well-done!
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7/1/2015 5:43:26 PM
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My poem Leviathan
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Was like you distilled the emotion from the novel, which is after all, what poetry's all about.
-- regards ---bob
What novel??
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7/1/2015 5:47:35 PM
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To find in words the Beauty
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I would argue that poets also listen with their ears because how the words sound is important. I like still
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