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7/20/2014 11:33:40 AM
trampled soul	my thoughts are sad, my wishes are for hope but my spoken words are anger. only in poetry can I hope to convey my feelings and show their true want for peace without offense. in the life-span of a poet I am an infant and will remain so I'm sure. so please, help with my structure, it will be appreciated, but at this point I feel the need to know if I'm offensive. the world seems so wrong to me and I feel like the current whipping boy. I'm just trying to understand my own perspective.
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7/20/2014 11:33:40 AM

my thoughts are sad, my wishes are for hope but my spoken words are anger. only in poetry can I hope to convey my feelings and show their true want for peace without offense. in the life-span of a poet I am an infant and will remain so I'm sure. so please, help with my structure, it will be appreciated, but at this point I feel the need to know if I'm offensive. the world seems so wrong to me and I feel like the current whipping boy. I'm just trying to understand my own perspective.

pages: 1