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12/21/2012 11:59:19 AM
Mirror Me What lies behind the mirror,
What hides within the clouds,
Who protects my mirror,
Who takes shelter in the crowds,
I protect my mirror,
Hide it from view,
For lying behind your mirror,
Is another side of you,
Some days you’ll be happy,
And others you’ll be sad,
Your eyes will cry your heart will bleed,
But yet you’ll still be glad,
Your loss will fade away,
For you’ll gain something new,
But once you lose yourself,
Then there’s nothing left of you,
With everything I do,
And every sight I’ll see,
I protect my mirror,
Because it shelters me.
12/21/2012 12:01:26 PM
Wilted Rose I like the poem! It was nice and told simple story, but held so much more underneath.
12/21/2012 12:06:06 PM
No Strength Your poem was deep and dark. I really enjoyed the tone.
12/21/2012 12:09:03 PM
Checkmate I honestly got chills. The words were very precise and just beautiful. It told a very unique and interesting story, which was very complex but still simplistic. I really enjoyed it. The ending was my favorite part. Especially the last phrase when you talk about the pawn. Thank you for sharing this poetry.
edited by passionscript on 12/21/2012
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