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Bernard Colasurdo - all messages by user

12/10/2012 12:53:17 PM
Depression and Hope	Hi Karlin, I;m not a teen : ) but I've been struggling for a while now since my beautiful wife and the love of my life passed away from a horrible bout with cancer 6 months ago leaving me feeling so lost and alone. In my journey through this painful experience and life in general I've come to realize that life is full of ups and downs and that their are lessons to be learned in the downs, as hard as they may be to cope with. The downs bring out talents, abilities and desires that we may have never had the opportunity to express and that can bring us to different level of happiness and hope and joy that we may have never felt. Keep writing as it is an emotional release and just may be what rescues you from this pain in your life. and remember God is there for you, He loves you and you are never alone. Be Well
12/28/2012 12:49:04 AM
please critique	Abberations of a flailing mind The morning births a new day's sun Revealing night's shadowed pun Why this road, you ask of me? Something wrong, I''ve done to thee? My body weighs like anchored ships No words I speak from quivering lips My hands are bound, my mind is spent As thoughts incarnate my lovers scent. My sight is scant, a labored breath Desperate cries, My soul near death Each beat my heart now pays its dues For loving you was mine to choose I lye in angst, a tattered seam A chapter closed on lover's dream Oh my lord, my dearest friend I pray to thee in hopes to mend This broken heart, of saddened tale To find the truth where others fail My dearest God I crave thee now Since my love has flown to thou These answers that I fail to find Aberrations of a flailing mind Imprison me from heavens love And make me doubt my God above But I will not let idle mind Keep me from my destined time For life is short and one day near I'll hold the one I love most dear So steadfast will I trust in him And never doubt my God within.
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