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12/19/2011 12:35:33 AM
What Do you think Hidden deeply in the disparadised mind;
Lays a spot where hope fails to rise.
Disapprobation of crosses, crescents, and stars,
Eidolicly veiled over our internal scars.
Reason allows and insidiously leads, through the ghastlyrealm of immortality.

Saints may follow, yet will never lead;
Zealously trying to help you regain your blind normalcy.
This and that may temporarily ease the sore.
The material bliss is quickly lost, once again aware of
Your place as times required whore.

Oh! With the outmost certainty, even the worms
Will succumb to the rot of eternity.
12/19/2011 12:59:00 AM
What Do you think Please just let me know if you like it or not; this is my first time showing my poems to people and want honest feedback... Thankyou
12/19/2011 1:17:03 AM
Comedy of Man: Please Respond The evil of the elders,
Will torture the loving mind.
With the passing of their ways.
Their old age divine.
Truth and innocence are snuffed,
As the ignorance transcends.
The most poignant part maybe;
Shall the world be blind ‘til the end?
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