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3/5/2011 2:07:57 PM
Homeless Note the sighing of day's retreat
Color the grey blackness of night
Drunken thievery my feat
Of gleaming lights, beckoning frights

To begin to stir in this sea
Of a waning tumultuous falling
Baptized with his promise to me
Survival his only calling

No white bursting of the stars
In this sea of a fading fading grasp
No redeeming god, no ark
Messed up with each other perhaps
3/5/2011 6:36:20 PM
Harvest Swollen sky, then lonely drop of rain
Hangs for me onto window pane
Stretching 'til its bottom smacks its top

Gliding downwards stalk of grass
A mirror to the dew, like polished glass
A sly sinking into fertile soil
Upon which not to tread: life need uncoil

And the westerly wind will blow a sea
Before the evening carries its plea
Of yellow brown around stooping figures
Outwards they will turn, never linger

Toward beckoning rise of moon
And this rising, my dear, never too soon
Will mark the end of their soothing songs
No ending however of which they long
6/7/2011 6:05:35 PM
rating a poem I hate to ask this, for it seems as simple as it is slightly vain. When one rates a poem, what is the scale? For example, what would be a 7.00? Is it out of 10.00? Thank you.

11/22/2011 10:11:09 AM
midwinter pause Trees fingering bone
White of winter stand crooked
Under the sunless sky
8/28/2012 2:36:40 PM
posting and editing this is actually not a response but a question. I seem to be unable to post a new poem on poetrysoup. I have been a member for over a year and had a poem featured, so I do not know why this is the case. If anyone could be of assistance, that would be great. Thank you.

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