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1/28/2011 4:05:34 AM
||Hello everyone. My name is Camille and this is the first time I have ever joined any forums. As a child I have always loved poetry and it is a dream to share my works with people who appreciate them. I hope I could all get to meet you and I am truly excited to get to read new poems and to post my own as well. I hope I could make some new friends here. Feel free to check my work and make comments. Thanks!
1/29/2011 8:53:00 PM
The Eternal Chess Game
||hello.i'm new here in poetrysoup. I am not really an authority when it comes to judging poems, but I really like this one. It gives me a haunting feeling. I agree with the idea - there won't be light without darkness; none would exist without the other. Hope you write more poems like this
1/29/2011 8:57:16 PM
||I tread a boundless earth
The vines rush to adore my feet
Mistress of the rare I am
Up above canopies cover my stead
I tempt the winds, the tide
Even the sun knows not to tame me
Endless is my spirit wild
My minions look at me with awe
Oh how great they say I could be
Radiant and free
Yet my heart stops - leaps - throbs
Of something now I cannot be
Of something still I must then be
A fire unfelt, a well unfilled
How may then? How will then?
I know not still.
But this I feel
I look at the stars tonight and see
Gleaming diamonds of dwarfish light
Away and unsure but yet
I envy them.
Up there they are nothing compared to me.
They are hundreds while I
In solitude tonight am here
To cry - far away from sight
Beneath the darkness, beneath the bright
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