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4/18/2021 1:15:54 AM
Comments	Did anyone answer this question? I too would like to know how to reply to comments.
4/18/2021 2:35:18 AM
Comments	I finally figured it out: you can reply to comments within the poem that they refer to but not in the "comments" tab. Terrymiller wrote: Did anyone answer this question? I too would like to know how to reply to comments.
7/5/2021 2:28:11 AM
Two versions would appreciate comments	Super, Awesome and Grand! Rasp-rasp, rasp-rasp, the saw moves up and down; because coffins are built better by hand. My young daughter watches in her pink gown; to make sure that it's right, you understand. "It can't; it can't be a shabby old box," she cried out loud; "best wood, best silk, and, and; he needs to be dressed in one of his frocks; it has to be super awesome and grand!" Her first small pet, Bunny, expired today. Put in the box with love; sobbing, and tears we'll surround it with buds, flowers; and pray; while both stroking its soft downy big ears. "Can we plant it now, dad?" She said with glee "And will it grow into a rabbit tree?" Super, Awesome and Grand! Rasp-rasp, rasp-rasp, the saw moves up and down; because coffins are built better by hand. My young daughter watches in her pink gown; to make sure that it's right, you understand. "It can't; it can't be a shabby old box," she cried out loud; "best wood, best silk, and, and; he needs to be dressed in one of his frocks; it has to be super awesome and grand!" Put in the box with love; sobbing, and tears her first small pet, Bunny, expired today. While I worry about any new fears daughter of mine will just right out and say: "Can we plant it now, dad?" Somewhat with glee "And will it grow into a rabbit tree?"
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