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NieceyRosa - all messages by user

5/6/2019 12:33:16 PM
trees spiral up	trees spiral up towards the starry night. a village sleeps.
5/6/2019 12:41:41 PM
A New Beginning	I am an emerging poet. I'm just starting out. Although my poetry was published in The Awakenings Review, I still have a lot to learn. I love short form poetry. I want to learn more about haiku, haibun, tanka, and sonnets. I am approaching poetry as my career path, and would appreciate any advice you can offer. I utilize poetry as a means to cope with my mental illness. Writing has really saved my life (on more than one occasion). I look forward to meeting all of you, and I am happy to join this vibrant community.
5/6/2019 12:55:23 PM
That of Mine	Okay, I thought this was an intriguing poem. I liked how you utilized alliteration in the second line. The internal rhyme in line seven was a nice touch. You had vivid visual imagery in this piece. I especially enjoyed the beginning lines. However, I was quite confused about the overall theme of the poem. Is this a love poem? Or is it about writing? I guess the lack of punctuation made it difficult for me to comprehend your piece. I mean no disrespect. I actually would like to know more about what inspired you. It was a very creative piece. Keep writing; you have a lot of potential.
5/6/2019 1:07:21 PM
Poet Lore Literary Journal	Thank you Richard for providing this information. I'm a beginning poet, and I had never heard of the Poet Lore Literary Journal. This was a real treat. Again thank you.
5/6/2019 1:10:13 PM
Great publisher. Get your book in print.	Thank you! This information is so awesome!
5/6/2019 1:24:42 PM
Gone	drowning in a sea of faces i am disconnected from all i encounter gone is the illusion of interdependence. i am a lone creature roaming a vast abyss. there's nothing to console me here. the black hole of loneliness devours my psyche... i've been told by dear Donne "no man is an island!" yet i am psychologically stranded on an archipelago. reading the horizon like a new york times bestseller in hopes of finding a rescue vessel.
5/6/2019 1:33:44 PM
New poem	This was a good piece. It made me think of times when I left things unsaid to someone I loved, and how I regretted it. You're right silence can be deafening. Keep up the great work.
5/7/2019 8:32:30 AM
Emerging artist	Welcome to Poetry Soup, Nocturne. I hope you enjoy it here. I look forward to reading your work. Have a great day.
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