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8/5/2011 1:37:20 AM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer I like it because I can tell what it's about. If it were mine would try to work on the meter and get a little rythm into it. I would also try to remove words to make it more 'economic' and punchy.
edited by Skodster on 8/5/2011
edited by Skodster on 8/5/2011
8/5/2011 1:48:54 AM
First Poem...would like honest critique B_Pay wrote:
I'm just worried my poem comes across a little too much like green eggs and ham cause I prefer it to rhyme.



I liked your poem and I could easily understand its meaning. I think rhyme is clever as you not only have to convey your thought but in addition, make it phonically attractive. I do both but get the biggest satisfaction from rhyme as it's the biggest challenge.
9/8/2011 5:05:13 PM
What kind of poem is this? Hi everyone!



Please can tell me what kind of poem has subsequent lines rhyming?




Example;




....classes

....molasses

....answers

....dancers




I can't find the answer anywhere!
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