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Skodster
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8/5/2011 1:37:20 AM
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Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer
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I like it because I can tell what it's about. If it were mine would try to work on the meter and get a little rythm into it. I would also try to remove words to make it more 'economic' and punchy.
edited by Skodster on 8/5/2011
edited by Skodster on 8/5/2011
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9/8/2011 5:05:13 PM
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What kind of poem is this?
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Hi everyone!
Please can tell me what kind of poem has subsequent lines rhyming?
Example;
....classes
....molasses
....answers
....dancers
I can't find the answer anywhere!
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