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9/6/2021 4:37:33 PM
Ally Faye Posts: 2
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This time it's clear he's no better than you just because he lives in the loft like a throne room.
It's a funny mess you're in, living off other people like a wet sack of meat.
You won't keep long without help.
So help me understand confusion around the dinner table: "So, what's new with you?" "How're they treating you?" "You still wasting your life?"
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