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1/5/2021 8:23:26 PM

mike porter
Posts: 10
The preacher preached a fiery sermon.
Words penetrating the soul like hot coals on fire.
Branding with burning guilt across the hearts
Who seek after sinful desires.
That scratches the soul like.
prickly thorns and briars.
Pleasure and temptation conspire.
To lead you into the pit of fire.
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9/19/2021 10:08:40 PM

Twelve Twelve
Posts: 9
One that makes you think, and brings me back to the Baptist church of my youth. Well done!
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