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3/14/2019 5:44:59 AM

eckho scott
Posts: 3
Can you feel me
Out across the Matrix
Where only our spirits can see
I feel you
And I know everything
I hear your heartbeat
Pulsing through my veins
And I know forever
Suddenly not so frightening
I will dance in the rays
Of your light
And I will smile
Loving you, loving me
Seeing me in your eyes
And how you love me
Softly love me
I will sing you love songs
Words from my heart
My lips
To your heart
To your spirit
And I will love you
And you will love me
Please don't ever let me go
I will hold you in my heart
And never let you go
I am yours
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