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12/10/2018 10:47:03 AM Arjun Jangid Posts: 10	As i heard about the contest of most beautiful person I packed my luggage hurriedly and ran in search of that lucky person. First of all i recalled my teacher leisure time creation of the God if eyes may be judge,the winner was she. But me and my friends were bitten several times so without beautiful heart how can be winner , may be she. Next i saw a body builder well balanced muscles and bones but he was soon lost the contest because he was made for ownself not for others . All physical beauty killed by time so smart personalities lost charm of win the most beautiful person without any more harms. After i saw a half naked boy sharing his alms with stray dog unwillingly i followed him to declare the most beautiful person . But regret he lost the chance also when I followed him to give the title he kicked the same love chained dog . So the search for most beautiful person is still going on if anybody meet the person who have the beautiful heart at universal place and at universal time. Give regards, title and salaam from me and whole mankind.
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12/15/2018 5:36:20 AM Arjun Jangid Posts: 10	Please give your opinion
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10/19/2022 8:14:01 PM EOTrees Myles Posts: 14	Arjun Jangid wrote: Please give your opinion -- E.O.-Tree"s Myles
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10/19/2022 8:36:43 PM EOTrees Myles Posts: 14	I am going to be as raw and real with you, this is a good poem but it could use some editing. Your structure and stanzas are very well put together just do some reediting and If it gets publised and it could possibly do so, I will be at your book signing. -- E.O.-Tree"s Myles
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