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5/12/2010 8:46:48 AM
Patty Lane Posts: 5
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I am surprised only one commented on this poem. This is my favorite poem! Did they not get it? Maybe not as many people as I thought saw the "The Matrix." Patty
BEAST OF BURDEN - A FABLE IN RHYME
Once upon a time in a hamlet name Le’May Two mules were watching the folks who blocked their way What's taking so long? Said the white mule to the grey Why don't they get a move on, I want to run and play Be patient my boy, it's a human thing they do They are pondering the boxes the master left in view See them in the road there … in sizes - just the two All must make a choice of one in order to pass through But father that's an easy choice, the larger box is best Who would pick the smaller one when all you'd get is less That’s not always true my son, but if I had to make a guess Size indeed might matter here, a fact I'll now address You see, the Master always has a plan for anything that might Invigorate the hearts of those who’ve given up on life And so he gives them trials that oft time will ignite The dying-trying embers in need of passion’s light I see you're looking puzzled son, so let me edify I heard some fellows talking as they happen to pass by One said unto the other, friend I'm telling you no lie You mean to say they're both alike, the poser did reply Yes, both contain a truth unknown. In that they are the same I heard the Master tell this to the boy on Willow Lane Adding, he who seeks the better light must approach the flame For truth will bright the caravan while they in dark remain
Now I couldn't hear the rest my son as those people moved away But I think I understand what the Master had to say You see truth is like an open door where depending on its sway The direction of perception is how it is surveyed
Let’s say you choose a door, you’ve entered through once more You're going to get what you expect. There's nothing to explore For the mind is designed … to dine on the obscure With an appetite that’s primed for mystery’s allure Still, if your heart has questions and likes to take a chance Why not try that different door to mysterious circumstance It might stagger your reality and gamble your confidence But truth for some can often plumb the core of all imbalance So I guess what's in the boxes that the humans need critique Is a fitting kind’ve platform for the sort’ve truth they seek And the box that will be chosen by the complacent or the meek Might well be the smaller box for egos that are weak For those who dare to walk the edge to hazard the unknown They might choose the larger box even when they’re shown Realities not readied for along the new path honed For truth is still the rudest king to ever sit a throne Then it’s “knowledge” in the boxes. Is that what it’s about Why how smart you are my boy, you’ve got it figured out “Knowledge” is precisely what it is without a doubt Though misinterpretation can bite you on the snout Son, “knowledge” is no jester on the battlefield of “right” It’s army strong and payback long for you the neophyte Deception’s guise that truth belies can not endure the fight For “knowledge” is the teeth that gives the mouth of truth its bite Ah, but they are stubborn as can be as far as humans go They just can not accept things as they are, as we all know But that is how he made them, the Master planned it so ... though It can’t be easy being human child, they’ve quite a load to tow Father? Yes son And they call us the beast of burden?
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