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1/11/2011 9:16:59 AM

Abby Petrie
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My little Flower,
Why do you weep,
In your perfect existence?
Did you finally relies
The corruption at the ties?
My silly sorrowful flower
I cry with you,
For your perfectly misguided existence.
Why did you choose to bloom
In such wretched soil?
My little flower
Why do you weep?
Why do you search for corruption?
When all is well it seems?
Silly little flower
All you will find
is a heart full of ache.
So, I too will cry
As your final bloom
Ends your perfectly misguided existence.
My little flower
I know for whom you weep
As my tears return to me.
Silly little flower
Why do you weep for me?

edited by AbbyLee on 1/11/2011
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