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6/25/2013 2:52:42 AM
Used to worry about polluting the air,
Now it's food,
Gotta read labels,
Those scientific fourteen letteringredient(s)
Might do crazy things to your hair!
Look up and down isles,
My stomach feels out of place
All I'm looking for is real food
Seems most the world and I don't workat the same pace
If I'm getting attacked my an asteroid,
Maybe Top Ramen
Maybe, just maybe Spaghettios
But everyday? My body would bedestroyed!
That motor oil belongs in your car
Not in fruit or a TV. Dinner
Because the gov paid a farm!
It's become machines and chemicals
The human race
People, come on!
We need to kick it up a notch
I know there's humans with good taste
Please don't make food
Where chemicals and flour becomeinterlaced!
The human race made these factors
Mother nature doesn't need to botherscaring us with her disasters
We'll wipe ourselves out or go to Mars
Too bad I'm not a fan of those candyBars
Those would do me just right
If I'm stuck in a basement
While an asteroid hits and tries toburn us out of sight.
edited by svlynn18 on 6/25/2013
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