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6/19/2013 9:00:02 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Small changes come in different shapesand sizes
Don’t forget for a second what we letdivide us
At the end of the day how does physicalbeing really matter?
Be kind, one day the one you quietlydisgrace might save ya

No one is perfect, no one is superspecial
We're all here for a reason,
No one is blessed with a special spell
it'd be scary to animate what some keepinside
They figure out what makes them tick,what makes them drive

I'm not trying to get psychological
These are thoughts that cross my mind
My own behavior scares me sometimes
As I change, it's like steppingoutside of my skin
Better described as emerging from whattrapped me, the hollow bin
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