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5/7/2013 6:25:40 PM

Teresa Lindsay
Posts: 16
The world outside is unkind, giving us many lows
We become weary trudging thru the day
Feeling downtrodden and weary from it
Come on home my dear and tell me about the day
Lay your weary head on my shoulder, cast out your worries
Tell me your troubles and let it all go from your mind
If I could I would make the world go away for you to sleep
Lay your weary head down and close your eyes
I am here holding you close to my heart so you can sleep
Rubbing your back to ease the tension away
Softly kissing your check as you drift off
Don't fight the sleep lay your weary head down
Sweet dreams my love
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