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4/18/2013 1:26:35 AM

cheung shun sang
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Load…
Pure caprices are moral thing.
China tyranny all are sins.
Come to sing are whistles cases.
Drives with forces are men with maces.

Sheer as wools are wolves with coats.
Tubs to thumps are cameras loaded.
Tuck in all are govern needs.
Tyrants’ forces spoiled our seeds.

Seek our dirty bosses as due.
China tyrants are bad for uses.
Soft despotic cheat our life.
Bad are army fields and lines.

Balsam trees are fragrant trees.
Better men are good to see.
Files are bursts are putsches are boots.
China laws are raw are rude.

Load our baggage all are faith.
Heaven comes are gods to date.
Money ranks are bribe are swine.
Taiwan songs are nature high.
----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3-----------------

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