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3/16/2013 12:10:26 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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You want a nice house You want a nice car Big line of credit Paycheck won't go far
Heated pool with slide Cell phone with bluetooth device Laptop TV with webcam Recliner that goes to Mars Just put it all on a charge card Or advance on home equity I want to be a star
Twenty minutes of mirror fame dies Every part of your wallet is miles dry Gotta go back to work serving the pool cleaner No chance to enjoy that pool deck either
I've listened to you talk for the last 1800 second From the materialism I'm glad I've grown independent Life is too short and there's too many like you Lowered the credit in the world, Who's sweating bullets to pay bills? Yep, this girl All you do is moan and grown Get what comes around Better to die poor than alone edited by svlynn18 on 3/16/2013
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