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11/16/2012 11:02:51 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Staring at this screen
My thoughts are a race car in the indie500
Highly combustible and fast
When I blink, they seem to wipe clean

I try to stare again,
All I hear is this woman “Waa WaaaWa Waaa”
She'd be the perfect person for thePeanuts Christmas Chex Mix commercials

I look down at the packet I was handed
Shows a picture of the new phone out,
Diagram shows where the controls are
And how to troubleshoot issues
Man..What I would give..
TO reach through the speaker of my headset
Flick her in the nose, and force her to read her manual
But I would fail Quality Assurance if I did that
So I'll just sit here and be grateful I have a job.
edited by svlynn18 on 11/16/2012
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