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11/12/2012 5:56:37 AM
BERNARD WACHIRA Posts: 1
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I said goodbye to you in a dream, But in reality I had to walk away. This love was like an elusive bar of gold, I was trying to hold in my hands. Memories and a shadow of my love, Is what I am trying to hold on to, To have the feel of you close again. To me your love is like the fog and the mist, That I am trying to grab with my hands. I see you disappear into the dark night, But in the horizon I see a love sign in red. When I try to get closer and closer to it, The horizons seems to move far and far, It is like I am chasing my own shadow
If I had to travel to space and get you a star, I would have gone and plucked one for you. To me I have tried to live my sweet dream, But the dream was over before starting. Every morning was a morning of hope, But the elusive love dwindled with hopes, And brought pain to my tender heart
I felt a faint heartbeat of a broken heart, Crying tears of a love it never had. Moment after moment, day after day, Wishing you only gave it a drop of your love. Just like heaven and earth can never meet So is our hearts never got together as one. For your elusive love kept fading away, Just when I thought I was getting closer.
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