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10/19/2012 12:58:06 PM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
Mellow yellow, life is good;
twas afraid to try but found that I could.
Hills and vails I have surpassed;
through it all I did indeed travassed.
Little now to do or attempt;
challenges for now I am exempt.

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