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9/23/2012 11:17:09 AM

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My Love

You found me when my heartwas lost,
But now it is nevermore.

Faith is no longer a wordwithout meaning,
And my tears are no longer streaming.

No light nor dark touches myface,
There is air for me tobreathe.

Love is now in my life,
And I have skin upon myskin.

When you pulled me from my wreckage,
I am thankful I let you in.

You always see past thebeast within me,
We never have to beginagain.

My cheeks are dry, my heartalways beats,
And you are the sun thatshines.

Because I promised to alwayslove you ,
And feed you years of joy.

Never will I leave you……
Because I will always be Mrs. Holly Moore.

Mrs. Moore – 2/14/11
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9/28/2012 4:39:44 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Aww..this is so cute! Glad you found love, this made me smile))
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10/1/2012 9:10:47 AM

Al Beech
Posts: 3
heartwas, wordwithout, myface,tobreathe,myskin, thebeast, beginagain. heartalways, thatshines. alwayslove
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