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9/23/2012 11:17:09 AM
HOLLY MOORE Posts: 2
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My Love You found me when my heartwas lost, But now it is nevermore. Faith is no longer a wordwithout meaning, And my tears are no longer streaming. No light nor dark touches myface, There is air for me tobreathe. Love is now in my life, And I have skin upon myskin. When you pulled me from my wreckage, I am thankful I let you in. You always see past thebeast within me, We never have to beginagain. My cheeks are dry, my heartalways beats, And you are the sun thatshines. Because I promised to alwayslove you , And feed you years of joy. Never will I leave you…… Because I will always be Mrs. Holly Moore. Mrs. Moore – 2/14/11
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9/28/2012 4:39:44 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Aww..this is so cute! Glad you found love, this made me smile))
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10/1/2012 9:10:47 AM
Al Beech Posts: 3
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heartwas, wordwithout, myface,tobreathe,myskin, thebeast, beginagain. heartalways, thatshines. alwayslove
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