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8/27/2012 1:43:05 AM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133

Ive always been different,
Worked out for me,
Never fit in,
My ways hard to see,

Been told I think too much,
Maybe some don't think enough,
To achieve goals in life,
Gotta make touch decisions, be tough,

Been with my man 12 years,
I've always loved him
Cause I wont sign a paper,
I get **** and various disapprovinggrins
No reason to have presidents tiedtogether,
Our love doesn't need to be gov.stamped,
It's meant to last forever,

Working for him 5 years,
Entreprenuer status I admire,
Motivation, drive, optimism, andpassion,
These qualities in a boss, you'd nevergrow tired,
I get those looks, people think I'mdumb,
For believing this dream will ever cometrue,
It's coming along, it's coming along,now it's actually happening,
You'll apologize later, there's nothingelse I'd rather do

When we talked rings,
Made it clear no blood diamonds,
Life's too precious for a pretty rock,
Why did something so inhumane have tohappen?
Lab created, that's my request,
Got the Diana style, Simply the best,
When I look at my hand I only seebeauty,
Couldn't support a a rock coming fromthe line of duty

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