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Edward
Easy-going, Diligent, Creative, and Spiritual
Brother of Stephen, Mildred, and Jeanette 
Lover of Nature, Women, and Poetry
Who feels Pain, Love, and Empathy
Who fears The Unknown, Snakes, and Heights
I would like to see The Eiffel Tower, El Castillo, and The Great Wall of China
Resident of Moravia Park Drive, Maryland
Ibeh

I'm currently working as a Lot Associate at The Home Depot
I'm a Navy veteran 
Born in Lima, Ohio in October 28th, 1976
Graduated from Lake Clifton Campus(formerly Lake Clifton Eastern High School), Baltimore, Maryland in 1995
Graduated from Essex Community College in 2003 and Brightwood College(formerly TESST College of Technology) in 2005
Certifications: Electronics Technology, Telecommunications, Fiber-Optics/Copper Network Cabling 

I started writing poetry in November 2006. However, after losing my poetry notebook with about 135 poems in early 2009, I lost my passion for poetry completely. I was jobless for almost a year due to the recession of 2014, during that time period, I reignited my passion for poetry to stave off boredom. I discovered Poetrysoup and started posting my poems in 2016. The first poem I posted, "Wings of A Butterfly." My poems "Sing To Me, Nightingale, Unfulfilled Dream" and "A Waxing Crescent" appeared in the first issue of Poesis Online Journal

 


TeamPoetrysoup, please add my invented form(Yalto) to this site.

Blog Posted:7/26/2019 12:40:00 PM


I sponsored the "Human Nature" poetry contest using the form. There's currently no poetry form beginning with the letter "Y" on this site, I think it's time to change that.

Yalto (pronounced YAWL-Toh)

Each line has a specific number of syllables

Line 01:  3 syllables
Line 02:  4 syllables
Line 03:  2 syllables
Line 04:  4 syllables
Line 05:  5 syllables
Line 06:  3 syllables
Line 07:  2 syllables
Line 08:  3 syllables
Line 09:  2 syllables
Line 10:  3 syllables
Line 11:  3 syllables
Line 12:  5 syllables
Line 13:  6 syllables
Line 14:  1 syllable
Line 15:  5 syllables

 

Some of the poems I've written in my invented form


Life Lessons (most recent)
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/life_lessons_1168761

Gun Violence
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/gun_violence_1142656

Consumed
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/consumed_1119332

Life Is Life
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/life_is_life_1065292

Unfulfilled Dream
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/unfulfilled_dream_1035968
(my first and fav poem with the form)

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Date: 7/28/2019 7:50:00 AM
Edward, it's a great form but sadly I think Brian is correct !
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Date: 7/27/2019 4:13:00 AM
contd.. (based on my experience with the footle and many others I have promoted over the last decade)Better exposure of your form can be obtained elsewhere on the net,including the creation of your own blogspot.com links......PS has many pluses...but promotion of a form is not one (imho)of them......just saying..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2019 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your informative, eye-opening perspective, Brian:-) I really appreciate it!
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Son of Spock
Date: 7/27/2019 7:06:00 AM
Brian, who knew you were such a cynic. I like it!
Date: 7/27/2019 4:05:00 AM
(contd)In any event Edward many of TPS 'types of poem' descriptions are incomplete and exclude vital elements often with poor examples.Take the tetractys, this is the late Ray Stebbings definition thereof"The tetractys poetic form was devised by the late Ray Stebbing as a grammatical 20 syllable verse of 5 lines.Syllable sequence 1,2,3,4 & 10.Each line to stand on its own.The challenge is to express a complete thought,profound or comic,witty or wise within the 20 syllables.The tetractys can be doubled or inverted. " Now check out TPS description and example.(tbc)
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:59:00 AM
Unlikely to happen Edward,last time I tried to get one listed(not of my own invention) TPS criteria is circular, requiring proof of existing extensive prior use on the internet.If this had been the case in 2009,my footle(now a global poetry form )would not have been listed.Happily it did because of folk who took it up inhouse here.(tbc)
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Date: 7/26/2019 1:36:00 PM
Can I pronounced it yal-toh? Yawl-toh sounds too much like y'all tow the line, ya hear?
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Ann Foster
Date: 7/31/2019 1:51:00 PM
"tow the line", hehe... somehow that fits as part of this. Of course, the line being lines of poetry, dragged around, until they successfully put themselves together, by...Oh? us... lol I also agree with keith, never mess with a poets... boundaries...causes them to write more often...
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2019 7:05:00 PM
Feel free, my friend:-) Thanks for the belly laugh, you two...LOL
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/26/2019 6:58:00 PM
I never argue with a man in a turtleneck. YAWL-toh it is!

My Past Blog Posts

 
Ok, something has to be done about this.
Date Posted: 9/15/2019 8:32:00 AM
Attention all published soupers: TIA!
Date Posted: 9/14/2019 8:57:00 AM
My "Pick A Title, Vol 8. - Acrostic - Poetry Contest" is judged!
Date Posted: 9/7/2019 11:39:00 AM
My "Choose Your Own Title" Poetry Contest is finalized!
Date Posted: 8/20/2019 5:25:00 PM
Very important update for "Choose Your Own Title" Poetry Contest!
Date Posted: 8/9/2019 5:54:00 AM
TeamPoetrysoup, please add my invented form(Yalto) to this site.
Date Posted: 7/26/2019 12:40:00 PM
My "Pick A Title, Vol 6 - Personification" Poetry Contest is finalized!
Date Posted: 7/20/2019 10:22:00 AM
Back from vacation!
Date Posted: 7/18/2019 5:44:00 PM
Attention all " "Pick A Title, Vol 6 - Personification" entrants!(Very important)
Date Posted: 6/30/2019 4:59:00 PM
Pick A Title, Vol. 5 - Verse Poetry Contest Judged
Date Posted: 6/25/2019 2:18:00 PM
I'm livid. My last 6 poems...GONE. Please restore ALL of them, Team Poetrysoup
Date Posted: 6/18/2019 6:44:00 AM
Very important update for "Pick A Title, Vol 5. - Verse!
Date Posted: 6/8/2019 7:05:00 AM
Pick A Title, Vol 4 - Haibun Poetry Contest Judged
Date Posted: 5/24/2019 4:32:00 PM
Have you lost a poem on this site before?
Date Posted: 5/22/2019 5:55:00 PM
My "Pick A Title, Vol.3 Alliteration" Poetry Contest Judged
Date Posted: 4/24/2019 6:48:00 AM
My "Pick A Title, Vol.2 - Rhyme - Poetry Contest is finalized.
Date Posted: 3/23/2019 10:31:00 PM
My "Pick A Title -Free Verse - Poetry Contest" is finalized!
Date Posted: 3/9/2019 7:08:00 PM
"Pick A Title" - Free Verse - Poetry Contest Update: VERY important!!!
Date Posted: 3/3/2019 11:24:00 AM
"Poem Titled Saudade" Poetry Contest judged
Date Posted: 2/24/2019 7:58:00 AM
My "Polka Dots" Poetry Contest Judged!
Date Posted: 1/22/2019 4:06:00 PM
The Misery Poetry Contest has been finalized!
Date Posted: 1/5/2019 6:57:00 PM
"Would You Still Love Me" Poetry Contest is judged!
Date Posted: 12/25/2018 12:36:00 PM
"Would You Still Love Me" Poetry Contest Update. One word...WHOA!
Date Posted: 12/21/2018 9:55:00 PM
My "Tomorrow" Poetry Contest is finalized!
Date Posted: 12/1/2018 10:23:00 AM
One of Seven Deadly Sins Poetry Contest Judged!
Date Posted: 11/6/2018 4:26:00 PM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
9/22/2019 Rabbit Hole Verseaddiction,husband,marriag
9/22/2019 Removing The Stigma Sijodepression,mental illness
9/21/2019 Call Of The Blue Jay Haikuanimal,bird,song,visionar
9/21/2019 The Orator Senryuallusion,people,poetry,sp
9/21/2019 A Cedar Waxwing Haikuanimal,bird,music,nature,
9/20/2019 Why I Write Lyricemotions,inspiration,muse
9/20/2019 On The Cusp Of Destiny Versedestiny,future,student,su
9/15/2019 A Cup Filled To The Brim Verseheart,love,metaphor,symbo
9/14/2019 Panacea Verselove,perspective,truth,
9/14/2019 Svengali Acrosticanalogy,encouraging,god,m
9/14/2019 A Red Fox Haikuanimal,imagery,nature,
9/14/2019 A Liberating Gift Blank verseappreciation,art,metaphor
9/13/2019 If I Weren't Afraid Free verseboyfriend,girlfriend,loss
9/12/2019 Worm Moon Rising Haikubeauty,moon,nature,night,
9/11/2019 Martin Luther King, Jr Clerihewcelebrity,hero,people,tea
9/10/2019 Anger vs Forgiveness Verseanger,emotions,forgivenes
9/10/2019 Reconciliation Kimohusband,love,relationship
9/10/2019 A Psalm For Life Free versebeauty,celebration,god,im
9/8/2019 There Goes Summer Kwansabanature,seasons,summer,
9/8/2019 I've Got Music In My Brain Verseanalogy,emotions,joy,
9/8/2019 Forlorn Senryuemotions,grief,loneliness
9/8/2019 I Sense Your Essence In The Breeze Free verseendurance,love,passion,
9/8/2019 Make Someone Happy Senryuart,myth,song,
9/4/2019 Neglect Free verseanalogy,environment,image
9/3/2019 The Praying Mantis Haikuday,insect,nature,
9/3/2019 Don't Set Me Free And Then Cry For Me Free verseallegory,freedom,metaphor
9/3/2019 Shatterproof Listlove,people,perspective,r
9/1/2019 Of A Spark I do not know?romance,symbolism,
9/1/2019 Hurricane Dorian Haikunatural disasters,
8/31/2019 Star-Crossed Lovers Haibunbetrayal,love,relationshi
8/31/2019 Connery As James Bond Light Versecharacter,humor,people,pe
8/30/2019 Message In A Bottle Personificationinspiration,lost,sea,writ
8/29/2019 Sweet On You Acrosticdeep,love,passion,romanti
8/28/2019 Doomsday Prepper Verseday,future,humor,people,t
8/27/2019 To Thine Own Self Be True Free verseencouraging,identity,imag
8/26/2019 Of Mistakes Lyriclife,me,perspective,
8/25/2019 Keanu Reeves Clerihewart,celebrity,people,trib
8/25/2019 Sorry Son, I'm Saying No - A Collaboration Light Versefamily,father son,humor,
8/25/2019 Hapless Monokuchange,fate,money,sad,
8/24/2019 A Fervent Plea Versepassion,poetry,romantic l
8/24/2019 Your Waking Face Versebeauty,emotions,for her,h
8/23/2019 Banksy Acrosticart,celebrity,mystery,peo
8/23/2019 Angels Danced Haibunangel,
8/22/2019 Malcolm X Clerihewcelebrity,people,tribute,
8/22/2019 A Tethered Bird Verseemotions,freedom,loneline
8/22/2019 Inhumane Cruelty Political Verseanger,humanity,people,per
8/22/2019 A Weeping Heaven Haikubeauty,emotions,nature,ra
8/21/2019 October Dreamin' Nonetappreciation,dedication,j
8/21/2019 Viceroy Butterfly Haikubeauty,butterfly,insect,n
8/21/2019 Should Tomorrow Fade Into Oblivion Free versefuture,loss,
8/19/2019 Oak Tree Haiku Haikunature,tree,
8/19/2019 A Raja To His Rani Versepassion,romantic love,
8/17/2019 Shooting Stars Verseappreciation,imagery,star
8/17/2019 Teenage Dreamer Senryuboy,future,
8/17/2019 Inconsequential Acrostic11th grade,12th grade,enc
8/17/2019 Never Change Yourself Enclosed Rhymeencouraging,inspirational
8/17/2019 Vignettes Of A Ghetto Free verseenvironment,imagery,life,
8/15/2019 The Gift Of Love Lyriclife,love,meaningful,pers
8/14/2019 The Great Enemy Tyburnperspective,time,
8/13/2019 We're In This Together Free verseadventure,devotion,life,t
8/11/2019 Embrace Your Individuality Verseencouraging,humanity,iden
8/8/2019 My Sanctuary Acrosticlove,meaningful,passion,w
8/8/2019 The Freshness of August Air Haikuaugust,morning,nature,nic
8/8/2019 Rock Of Gibraltar Fibonaccifaith,love,metaphor,relat
8/4/2019 Respect Verseallusion,perspective,symb
7/28/2019 Chasing Perfection Sijomeaningful,perspective,tr
7/28/2019 Cool Fever Senryuchange,fate,lust,
7/28/2019 Of Chaos Free versemetaphor,perspective,
7/27/2019 More Importantly Verseconfidence,encouraging,pe
7/27/2019 Down By The Quay Free verseimagery,introspection,lon
7/25/2019 Life Lessons Verseappreciation,education,hu
7/25/2019 Grocery List Listfairy,me,
7/23/2019 Playtime Senryuchildren,games,happiness,
7/23/2019 Spellbound Haikuappreciation,child,imager
7/23/2019 Laughter Rictameteremotions,encouraging,happ
7/23/2019 Man And Dog Verseappreciation,dog,love,peo
7/23/2019 Choices Free verselife,meaningful,metaphor,
7/23/2019 Inexorable Dodoitsupeople,perspective,
7/22/2019 An Ending, aka Hindsight Twenty-Twenty Versecreation,death,farewell,
7/22/2019 Disgust Acrosticanger,evil,feelings,hate,
7/22/2019 Youth Monokumetaphor,youth,
7/22/2019 Under A Weeping Willow Imagismimagery,nature,peace,woma
7/22/2019 Peccadillo Monokuenvironment,humor,social,
7/22/2019 Murphy's Law Free verseintrospection,metaphor,sa
7/22/2019 I Appreciate You Free verseappreciation,dedication,f
7/21/2019 Switcheroo Senryubirthday,child,cute,humor
7/21/2019 Sad Surprise Senryudark,emotions,fate,sad,
7/21/2019 Marlon Brando Clerihewcelebrity,people,tribute,
7/21/2019 Lovely Rictameterbeauty,dedication,love,ro
7/21/2019 Knowledge Rictameterperspective,truth,
7/21/2019 Believe Rictameterdream,encouraging,faith,i
7/20/2019 What Bliss Is Acrosticemotions,happiness,love,p
7/20/2019 Graduation Day Senryucelebration,graduation,pr
7/20/2019 The Inviting Sea Chokaintrospection,memory,muse
7/20/2019 Anxious Monoku12th grade,anxiety,studen
7/20/2019 Madonna Clerihewcelebrity,people,tribute,
7/20/2019 Mindfulness Acrosticencouraging,environment,p
7/20/2019 Triumphant Homecoming Monokucelebration,soccer,sports
7/19/2019 Melancholic Memories Yet Bloom Free versememory,remember,
7/19/2019 There's The Rub Verselove,perspective,

My Photos


Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
Changing Sky Pantoumnature,sky,
Truth To Truth Free verseconflict,devotion,heartbr
Whiteness Acrostictribute,
Ransomed Free versefaith,jesus,
Then I Wake Rhymeabsence,love,miss you,mis
Listen To Life Free verselife,philosophy,truth,wis
Tell the Night to Hold Me Lyricforgiveness,heartbreak,he
To Read You Free verseappreciation,metaphor,pas
I wander the desert alone Free verseimagery,metaphor,nature,o
The Red Leaf Free versedeath,emotions,grief,hear
Your Cloud Rhymelove,simple,sky,wind,
Ineffable Free verseallusion,appreciation,bea
The House of Light Rhymebeauty,nature,
The Sounds Of A Rose Free verseflower,rose,
Roses Roses Roses Free versered,rose,
Child Diminished Hexaversechild,
Polka Dots And All Sonnet10th grade,beautiful,beau
Some Are Not Meant For This World Free verseabuse,allusion,death,dest
UNBEARABLE THIS LONGING Dramatic Versedeath,how i feel,
Inside a Cubicle Terza Rimawork,
In My Beautiful Dream Versedream,
My Winter Free verseinspirational,lost love,
My Darling Boy Quatrainanalogy,boy,childhood,inn
U G L Y Personificationanti bullying,beautiful,b
Civil Twilight Free verseappreciation,beauty,memor
SYLLABUS Versekiss,love,sensual,
Shooting Stars Verse10th grade,beautiful,imag
Blink Out Verse10th grade,11th grade,all
ONENESS Verseamerica,destiny,imagery,i
Transcending Hope Versehope,
Tutankhamun Verseadventure,appreciation,hi
Sometimes love just isn't enough Free verselost love,
No Longer Two Verse10th grade,emotions,feeli
DAYBREAK Versebird,joy,life,morning,
Fragility of Fate Free versedeath,love,love hurts,

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Eve Roper United States Flag United States Read
Lu Loo United States Flag United States Read
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nette onclaud Philippines Flag Philippines Read
Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode Canada Flag Canada Read
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Mark Toney United States Flag United States Read
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon Mauritius Flag Mauritius Read
Winged Warrior Canada Flag Canada Read
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The Brooklyn Six Project United States Flag United States Read
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