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Susurrus of October

Serenading voices of snow geese thrum in the morning sky Unrivaled is the clangor of their echoed gabbles in October Songs of Fall ride on the wind as russet leaves begin to fly Unrobed are trees; stripped bare, looking bereft and sober Ripened are amethyst crops of corn and grains in the field Rivaled by a soft golden glow of the gibbous harvest moon Undeniably beautiful, when in October its glow is revealed Seduced by its romantic luminance, lovers kiss and swoon On All Hallow's Eve, I see scary costumed trick-or-treaters Feasting on candy given by generous household greeters Ode to October, there's a chill aloft, whispering in the air Conspiring with Mother Nature in such a glorious season This pleasant month arrives with a stir of festive fanfare Offering a kaleidoscope of colors, and with good reason ~ Brushes in artists hands paint landscapes of Autumn days Eagerly, I welcome those dazzling hues that seem to blaze Rife with splendid riches, I chant October's songs of praise ~ October 2, 2020 ~ Pick-A-Title, Vol 23-Seasonal Acrostic Contest ~ Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh ~

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Date: 10/14/2020 4:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind congrats, Anne-Lise.
Date: 10/13/2020 10:47:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for the revisit and your congrats, Jan.
Date: 10/13/2020 7:03:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest! Just brilliant and fraught with vivid autumnal imagery, Jenna:-) One of my favorites submitted for my contest. Great ode to my birth month! Faved.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2020 7:44:00 AM
I am truly honored by your comments and the placement you've awarded my poem in your contest. Thank you very much, Edward...as well for faving it.
Date: 10/12/2020 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations, Jenna, on your Number 1 Win!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Newton.
Date: 10/2/2020 4:40:00 PM
Really delighted to read this, Jenna. Great rhymes, vocab, imagery. You captured such charming delights of the October panorama with the sights and sounds of the season. Favorite line is "dazzling hues that seem to blaze / Rife with splendid riches", love everything about this and going in my faves. Best wishes in the contest, I expect this to do very well ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2020 3:29:00 AM
So many wonderful compliments you offer, John, and each one is graciously welcomed. Thank you so much.
Date: 10/2/2020 7:58:00 AM
a superb rhyming acrostic, Jenna your imagery is sublime, you are so gifted and a rising star on soup:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 8:24:00 AM
and your comments are always very supportive and encouraging, Jan. I thank you for such kind thoughts. Hugs.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:57:00 AM
- An excellent ode to October ... colors and party ... grain and witches / trolls .... you have mentioned most things ... a month of joy :) - I wish you good luck in the contest, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 7:42:00 AM
October is the most charming month where I live. Not because of its colorful foliage, (there is none here), but weather wise. Thanks for your ongoing support of my poetry, Anne-Lise.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:53:00 AM
Very beautiful my friend. I especially like the last stanza.:) Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Linda.

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