Susurrus of October

Serenading voices of snow geese thrum in the morning sky
Unrivaled is the clangor of their echoed gabbles in October
Songs of Fall ride on the wind as russet leaves begin to fly
Unrobed are trees; stripped bare, looking bereft and sober
Ripened are amethyst crops of corn and grains in the field
Rivaled by a soft golden glow of the gibbous harvest moon
Undeniably beautiful, when in October its glow is revealed
Seduced by its romantic luminance, lovers kiss and swoon

On All Hallow's Eve, I see scary costumed trick-or-treaters
Feasting on candy given by generous household greeters

Ode to October, there's a chill aloft, whispering in the air
Conspiring with Mother Nature in such a glorious season
This pleasant month arrives with a stir of festive fanfare
Offering a kaleidoscope of colors, and with good reason ~
Brushes in artists hands paint landscapes of Autumn days
Eagerly, I welcome those dazzling hues that seem to blaze
Rife with splendid riches, I chant October's songs of praise



                 ~  October 2, 2020  ~
Pick-A-Title, Vol 23-Seasonal Acrostic Contest
           ~ Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 4:10 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thanks so much for your kind congrats, Anne-Lise.
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 7:45 AM
Thank you for the revisit and your congrats, Jan.
Ibeh Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest! Just brilliant and fraught with vivid autumnal imagery, Jenna:-) One of my favorites submitted for my contest. Great ode to my birth month! Faved.
Logan Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 7:44 AM
I am truly honored by your comments and the placement you've awarded my poem in your contest. Thank you very much, Edward...as well for faving it.
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations, Jenna, on your Number 1 Win!!
Logan Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:24 AM
Thank you so very much, Newton.
Watt Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Really delighted to read this, Jenna. Great rhymes, vocab, imagery. You captured such charming delights of the October panorama with the sights and sounds of the season. Favorite line is "dazzling hues that seem to blaze / Rife with splendid riches", love everything about this and going in my faves. Best wishes in the contest, I expect this to do very well ~ John
Logan Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 3:29 AM
So many wonderful compliments you offer, John, and each one is graciously welcomed. Thank you so much.
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:58 AM
a superb rhyming acrostic, Jenna your imagery is sublime, you are so gifted and a rising star on soup:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 8:24 AM
and your comments are always very supportive and encouraging, Jan. I thank you for such kind thoughts. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:57 AM
- An excellent ode to October ... colors and party ... grain and witches / trolls .... you have mentioned most things ... a month of joy :) - I wish you good luck in the contest, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:42 AM
October is the most charming month where I live. Not because of its colorful foliage, (there is none here), but weather wise. Thanks for your ongoing support of my poetry, Anne-Lise.
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Very beautiful my friend. I especially like the last stanza.:) Linda
Logan Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Linda.
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