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Wake Up My Heart

In the winter of my mind
my heart remains frozen,
memories sweet still unwind
love long forgotten.

Oh, how I remember
such romantic sunsets,
when we held the moon
in enchanting embrace!

Something did sway 
as love soon blossomed,
and left my ambiance
recklessly abandoned.

Flowers in my heart
will curl up and die,
if not awakened soon
by a vibrant butterfly.

Don't come knocking
if you don't wish to stay,
don't hurt my feelings,
mean what you say.

Bring back the persona
that once gleamed,
burning fire in your flame
that has since dimmed.

I see your silhouette
longing for passion,
I'll open the door
if I see true compassion.

Arrive at the sundown
to whisper in my air,
like the nocturnal moth
circles the moonflower.

You'll need to reignite
visions that fell apart,
to thaw frozen feelings
and wake up my heart.

October, 17, 2017
Wake Up My Heart
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

NOTE: Away from poetry soup for one week--starting tomorrow.

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Date: 10/21/2017 6:47:00 PM

    Vijay, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
  1. Date: 10/21/2017 8:02:00 AM

    Love never dies but waits the moment when we are true to ourselves so as to regenerate our being and reach higher grounds of glory! You see my friend, soon the dawn comes!
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 7:41:00 PM

    This poem is a gem, Vijay! I really love the rhythm and flow. Your pen speaks from the heart. Shimmering imagery ... very elegantly expressed. Many beautiful phrases throughout, my friend. An instant classic and going in the fave file for sure. Gold star poetry. Love and more love always.
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 9:56:00 AM

    A nice poem ...
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 5:20:00 AM

    Beautiful poem my friend... Have a nice break..
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 4:44:00 AM

    Beautifully penned my friend, I loved the way you have written this free verse, so wondrously rhythmical in every aspect! I believe your poem to be astounding, and I really enjoyed reading this splendid piece this morning! You have capture love in all it's forms, frozen to expressively wanton! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 3:55:00 AM

    For love to work it takes two to commit. If left to its own devices, love can wither away. You express yourself very well in this poem, Vijay. The imagery is very apt! Enjoy your time away from the soup - I look forward to your return!
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 3:38:00 AM

    so touched by this expressive poem, vijay... the last line was empowering!...huggs
  1. Date: 10/18/2017 12:08:00 AM

    What a lovely poem Vijay, it certainly fits the theme selected. Good luck in the contest, and its a fave with me...Maria
  1. Date: 10/17/2017 8:05:00 PM

    You penned a great one, Vijay! I’m sure you’ll do well in the contest. :-)
  1. Date: 10/17/2017 6:04:00 PM

    You did a fantastic job with the theme, Vijay. So romantic!
  1. Date: 10/17/2017 5:52:00 PM

    A lovely poem Vijay of a rebuffed love's reverie. Good luck in the contest and looking forward to seeing you back week after next! :)
  1. Date: 10/17/2017 5:42:00 PM

    Though this could endure betterment, the poem is not bad from the point of poetic expression and poetic lines. I enjoyed the middle part best. Keep it up! Luis Estable

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