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You echoed my voice

Look to the sky to witness morning glory
As rising vision writes an amorous story
Painting cosmic canvas delightfully spry
To witness morning glory, look to the sky

Listen to the birds for message they heard
As the horizon lit-up when emotions stirred
Blowing cheery winds chanting your words
For message they heard, listen to the birds 

Every day goes by without you by my side
Waiting to decide, I see you teary eyed
Trust the answer you have, don't ask why
Without you by my side, every day goes by 

Heeding my advice you echoed my voice
Leaning on destiny you made your choice
Trusting my friendship won't exact a price
You echoed my voice, heeding my advice 

June 20, 2018
Placed 1st: Late June 2018 standard contest by Brian Strand
This poem is a Swap Quatrain. This form was created by Lorraine M. Kanter.
Within the Swap Quatrain each stanza in the poem must be a quatrain (four lines) where the 
first line is reversed in the fourth line. In addition, line 2 must rhyme with line 1, and line 3 
must rhyme with line 4 and so on, BUT not repeat the same rhyming pattern on subsequent 
stanzas. Rhyming pattern: AABB, CCDD, and so on.

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018


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  1. Date: 6/21/2018 4:17:00 PM

    A Worthy winner Vijay, congratulations.
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 12:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, absolutely brilliant swap quatrain. :))
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 10:52:00 AM

    Congratulations Vijay, on your mastery of this form, so very well done indeed...
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 8:03:00 AM

    Ignored the form but I do not ignore your masterful writing and captivating verses ! Impressively beautiful my friend, Vijay! No surprise your TOP placement!
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 7:40:00 AM

    Congrats on your top placement, Vijay !!!
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 7:11:00 AM

    Congrats on your top win, Vijay. Well done.
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 6:33:00 AM

    I agree this is an interesting form and you have done well with it. Very nice Vijay :)
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 5:34:00 AM

    Interesting form, I had never seen one of these before.... You do rhyme so well Vijay..
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 5:09:00 AM

    Nicely done my friend Vijay!
  1. Date: 6/21/2018 3:46:00 AM

    Not as complicated as I thought, but you must have a flair for it. Very well done.
  1. Date: 6/20/2018 8:08:00 PM

    Very skillfully-written and moving, Vijay! Janice
  1. Date: 6/20/2018 6:26:00 PM

    Very nice swap quatrian, Vijay. I adore this invention of Ms. Kantor. A long time ago I met her online! I 've used this form several times and even won a very nice award for one of my swap quatrains. keep up with them. They suit you!
  1. Date: 6/20/2018 5:37:00 PM

    Hello Vijay, I've written Quatrain poems before, but never a "Swap Quatrain." This is a marvelously constructed and articulated write for sure with perfect balance and symmetry throughout the stanzas and verses. A very interesting theme as well. Superb Work!! Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent comment on my new political verse poem, "The Little Children are Crying.") Best Always, Gary