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Yalto-In Rows of Yellow Corn

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gilded hours’ intense writing, sunrise through twilight years. fine riffling through strange* fodder, of poets, i call friends. mind-blown’ evident sharpening tool - seed-sown’ harvest. in rows of yellow corn we stand TALL together. 10/6/2021 Yalto is a form invented by Edward Ibeh Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4, 5,3,2,3, 2,3,3,5, 6,1,5 syllables *Strange as in unknown, from a stranger

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Date: 10/9/2021 9:38:00 AM
Such an amazing Yalto, Kim:-) I love it! Faved.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2021 8:13:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! Great form! <3
Date: 10/8/2021 8:30:00 AM
A succulent expression for short and tall.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2021 3:42:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/8/2021 8:12:00 AM
Love the message here Kim! You crafted solid images with few words. it's great! Happy Friday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2021 3:43:00 PM
Happy Friday! Thank you, Mike!
Date: 10/8/2021 1:52:00 AM
So full of images and a great way to compose a poem. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2021 3:43:00 PM
Thank you! I do enjoy using Edward’s Yalto form!
Date: 10/7/2021 11:16:00 AM
You mastered the form Edward invented. Well done with metaphoric write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much on both accounts! You are appreciated, my friend!
Date: 10/7/2021 11:12:00 AM
This made me smile "fine riffling through strange* fodder, of poets, i call friends." As I know I am one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:12:00 PM
Absolutely! Love you, dear friend! <3<3
Date: 10/7/2021 9:58:00 AM
Excellent poem. We poets do stand tall together! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 10:05:00 AM
Colors, metaphors, contests, personalities, etc.. Love all! <3

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