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Redamancy Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Suzette Richards. Date written: 02/12/2024

Redamancy


I give you my heart 
Because you give yours to me;
'Tis a beautiful exchange.

With true confidence,
We both swim love's deep ocean,
Floating up to the surface.

confidencedeeplovesedoka

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Linda Alice Fowler

March 6, 2024 at 6:26 AM

Love exchanged - what could be better than that? Congratulations Edward! :)

Edward Ibeh

March 6, 2024 at 11:56 AM

Thank you very much, Linda:-)

Beata Agustin

March 5, 2024 at 12:58 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this delightful and delighting sedoka. God bless you.

Edward Ibeh

March 5, 2024 at 2:12 AM

Thank you very much, Beata:-) God bless.

Suzette Richards

March 4, 2024 at 12:07 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Edward. I enjoyed reading it. Suzette

Edward Ibeh

March 5, 2024 at 2:12 AM

Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Suzette:-) Most obliged.

Anonomus Scorpio

February 26, 2024 at 12:43 PM

To exchange loves most precious life preserver while in the ocean, whatever else is a heart for? Excellent best of luck to you in the competition! A.S.

Edward Ibeh

February 28, 2024 at 7:42 AM

Thank you very much, Anon:-) Most appreciated.