Goodnight Kisses

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Bitesize Poem No. 83 Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Line Gauthier. Date written: 03/23/2024

At the tail-end of a drawn-out day, I feel the gentle arms of Morpheus enfolding me. I have not one but two soft cheeks to kiss goodnight, first, my sleepy doe-eyed baby, then... the big one clutching the little; my better half.

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/23/2024 5:05:00 PM

Gave me goosebumps, can feel the love. Such a splendid picture this paints. The tenderness envelops, as you mention the arms of Morpheus who will shape your dreams. Edward, they say good things come in small packages and you just proved it with this little wonder.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 8:39:00 PM

Thank you so much for the awesome comments and visit, SV:-) Most obliged.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/23/2024 7:25:00 AM

Awwn this is so very sweet! I absolutely love the warmth and tenderness of unconditional love flowing in such a seamless manner, pleasure reading always your work. Best wishes for the contest

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 9:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for always supporting my poetry, Inky:-) Most obliged.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/23/2024 7:22:00 AM

Wonderfully reminiscing with the beloved--a sweet poem, my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 9:22:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)