My Winter

You entered my room
a long time ago
across many summers,
now when this winter looks
at the trees shedding the leaves
you are by the closed window
leaning on the cold wall
and I am by the fireplace,
your eyes on the cracking wood on fire
mine on the frosted window pane. 

Have you ever wondered
why my voice doesn’t reach you,
the words crash on the wall
and fall silent, that’s why.

Have you ever wondered
why my warmth doesn’t touch you,
the feelings brush the window pane
and freeze inert, that’s why.

Have you ever wondered
why my eyes don’t look into yours,
the vision is stuck on barren trees outside
and waits for the spring, that’s why.

Have you ever wondered 
why my hands can’t hold yours,
the reach is lost in distant time
and breaks separated, that’s why.

I have wondered
if I could break the cold wall
shatter the iced window pane 
make the trees green again
would my voice rise from the dust
the warmth of my mind melt the ice
my eyes bring colors of spring in yours,
would the time stop 
stop to create distance
and I could hold your hands again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 9:02 AM
Dear Subimal, I'm not surprised to see this powerfully moving poem on the podium yet again. It just gets more potent, more soulful and more meaningful with every read. Brilliant use of emotive and evocative imagery! It's an honor to share the podium with you once again, my poet friend. Congratulations for your success in Seth's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ray Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 4:49 PM
i am in awe, love the theme and how you execute this...truly speaks of the voids that come apart in love....
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:17 PM
Great write , Subimal, for Linda's contest. Congratulations on your win.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Hello Subima lSinha-Roy, I agree with this last Love should never die. it should continue to grow.I love this poem. It is beautifully written. Have a nice day my friend.
Ashley Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 10:44 AM
It was a pleasure to once again partake of the stunning emotional beauty of this poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. Susan
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Congrats on yr 1st!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:03 PM
Congrats on top win!
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Wow, this is a stunningly beautiful write, Subimal. FAVED!
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Wow, rereading this awesome poem a second time gives me a much deeper understanding. Your first four lines are VERY clear. Very deep. Very powerful. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal for this poem. A FAVE for me.
Ashley Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Returning with a big congrats Subimal on your win with this beautifully moving write with exquisitely expressed emotions and imagery. It gave me great pleasure to read this wondrous poem again. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 11:45 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your appreciation and comments.
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal ! Great poem and enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Thank you, Eve for liking the poem.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Congrats, Subimal. Great imagery of the distance in a couple.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Thank you, Line .
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Great poem with great lines and flow Subimall. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 12:20 AM
Thank you so much, SO for placing the poem and for your nice comments that I value immensely.
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 11:05 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Subimal, congrats :) -luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 12:45 AM
Thank you, Laura.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Great poem, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thank yiou, Line
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Very touching write Subimal, congrats on a fine placement!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thank you, John.
Rankin Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 1:19 AM
Very Lovely! I've read this five time and feel the words over and over. Well done!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 5:22 AM
Thank you so much, Carl. I am indeed glad you liked the poem. I guess time comes for many when distance becomes cold.
Barden Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Best New Poem, and the perfect choice ... this is a fav, and I keep coming back to it! Just love this ... blessings, and more accolades for this gorgeous write, my friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Thank you so much, Greg. It is really heartening to receive such beautiful comments from an accomplished poet like you.
Barden Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:20 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Subimal - blessings to you, friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Thank you, Greg. It is really nice to get your comments.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:07 PM
This is a very beautiful poem Subimal! Congratulations on having it in number one on the Best New Poems List! A very deserving honor! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thank you, Connie for your appreciation.
Lindley Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 8:11 PM
I am in awe of this magnificent gem my friend! You have gifted us such a treasure! Congratulations on this superb poem being number one on the top one hundred best new poems list.. A fav....
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, Robert for your appreciation. I am so glad you liked the poem. It's an encouragement.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Congrats on being number one in the top 100 poems!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, Richard. I am not aware of this statistics. Thanks for letting me know.
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 7:26 PM
many congrats subimal:-) hugs jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Ashley Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your top placement with this amazing write.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Thank you, Susan for your appreciation.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations, Subimal, this was a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Eve for encouragement.
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