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Precipice, Portal, Perpetual Words Poetry Contest. Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 01/17/2024

Perpetual

perpetual 
is my love for poetry.
without it 
how would life taste to me?
i bet it'd be so bitter 
i'd spit it out.
I'd choke 
on thousands of words 
unexpressed.
what would free 
my arrested words then?
pages would be 
as blank as 
a tabula rasa mind
as I was meant to bruise paper 
with an Ink-filled pen.
heaven knows 
what I'd be doing 
if my ink runs too dry 
to skate on a page.
who would hear
the child inside me cry 
when my muse goes missing?
lord knows passions 
roaring loudly 
inside me 
would be a silent 
as falling snow.
i need poetry 
perpetually 
so that people see 
what my eyes see,
feel what I feel deep within
and go places I go.
without poetry 
would life ever taste sweet?
the jury is out 
perpetual 
is my love for poetry. 
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:24:00 PM
Wow. I think the jury is in agreement as I, your love for poetry is perpetual. Your words are sweet as falling snow.
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Date: 3/16/2024 12:26:00 PM
Hello Edward, "Perpetual" captures a poet's unending love for poetry. Your words articulate how poetry can serve as a lifeline, transforming the bitter taste of a life unexpressed into a billowy cloud of emotions and visions. In Carl Sandburg's words, "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." Best wishes, Don
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Date: 3/12/2024 12:07:00 PM
Absolutely!! You have expressed your passion so well, Edward! Congratulations! -Smita
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Date: 3/6/2024 6:34:00 AM
Indeed what poetry means to each of us.. Also new here please have a look at my poems:)
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Date: 3/5/2024 1:21:00 PM
Your poem is a chart topper for best new poem. Congrats, Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/6/2024 4:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Date: 2/29/2024 8:52:00 AM
Dear Edward, "perpetual/is my love for poetry".. indeed! Such a grand opening verse to begin your profound artistic, emotional expression of your love for creating poetry. I admire your use of vivid imagery and rich metaphors in your poetic outpouring. I adore the poetic passion of "I was meant to bruise paper/with an Ink-filled pen" - wow! Such dynamic imagery! Heartfelt, dramatic and exquisite poetry, my gifted poet friend. Congrats for topping the best new 100 list! A well-deserved honor! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan P.S. A fav!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/29/2024 4:56:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and fave, Susan. You've made my day, my friend. Coming from such a great poet, it means a lot.
Date: 2/29/2024 5:31:00 AM
BIG congrats, my friend. Your poem is #1 on the best 100 list.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/29/2024 7:57:00 AM
Wow, what a pleasant surprise! Thanks for letting me know, Vijay:-) Most appreciated, my friend.
Date: 2/28/2024 6:59:00 AM
Hi Edward, I truly enjoyed reading this well crafted poem of yours, Perpetual. It is such an excellent and soulful piece.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/28/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nancy:-) I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 2/22/2024 10:45:00 AM
Loved it! Very nicely penned, Edward! -Smita
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/28/2024 7:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Smita:-)
Date: 2/14/2024 8:59:00 AM
Edward, excellent writing and wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest, blessings, Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/16/2024 4:18:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/28/2024 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations dear EI, on your win. Well deserved as always
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/16/2024 4:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Inky:-)
Date: 1/18/2024 6:44:00 AM
--perpetual is my love for poetry. without it how would life taste to me?--so that people see what my eyes see, feel what I feel deep within--wonderfully expressive my friend. So honest a depiction from someone who lives and breathes poetry. A FAVE from me too, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/18/2024 1:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay. I appreciate your wonderful comments and fave, my friend.
Date: 1/17/2024 8:12:00 AM
Me too, i think many can resonate with your poem so well woven about your love for poetry. I especially loved the line “ pages would be as blank as a tabula rasa mind as I was meant to bruise paper with an Ink-filled pen“ soul hitting! A fave it is
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2024 10:41:00 AM
Thank you very much for the awesome feedback and the fave, Inky:-) Most obliged.
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