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Apple Picking Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Robert James Liguori. Date: 10/04/2023
In the infancy of spring, An apple orchard raid. The trees are bearing blossoms, Teeming with fruit; Some ripe ones on the ground. The gang, excited and well-prepared. Jimmy is up one tree Shaking the branches As apples fall every which way. Apples here, apples there, Apples everywhere! His friends get busy picking them up. There's more than enough To fill up all the buckets and bowls "Jimmy, try one, they taste so good!," Exclaimed one of the pickers. "Not now, they must be washed first!," Replies Jimmy. They go tree to tree Plucking low hanging apples. Oh, the varieties! The varieties! Granny Smiths, Twenty Ounces, Rubyfrosts, Yorks, Galas, Golden Delicious.... Yummy looking apples! Lots and lots of collected apples To be enjoyed!

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Date: 10/5/2023 2:38:00 PM
You really created vivid imagery here..Great selection of words
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:07:00 AM
Great job, Edward! I always enjoy dialogue because it gives realism to a write. We chose to title our entries the exact same thing. Good luck.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/4/2023 10:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and well-wishes, Lin:-)

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