If Only You Knew

I heard the birds sing, felt when the breeze blew for you as sunburst sky flushed your face in hue. How adorable you were to me you had no clue, if only you knew. After the morose night in your garden I found me, how brightly I’d sparkled like the pearl of ecstasy, being on patina of your luring rose a drop of dew, if only you knew. From the eternity I borrowed the time we’d shared, like blazing sunset sky my yearning in reverie flared. How keen I was to see the day my dream came true, if only you knew. In blue firmament of your eyes my fervor had flown to the charming nest I’d built to become our own. How fondly I sheltered my memory as storm blew, if only you knew. Sound of your voice rippled the silence of longing, filled with melody the void of my lonesome being. How complete I became when you made me new, if only you knew. When drifting on the trail of melting mirage you left, like dry sands of caved-in dune I felt deserted bereft. How sadly my unsaid words ‘I need you’ I heard rue, if only you knew. When your essence remained within me as a shadow, fused with the darkness of abyss of my heart hollow, how many candles my love had lighted there for you, if only you knew. ___________________ August : 25, 2019 For A Brian Strand Rime Contest

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Date: 2/23/2022 7:56:00 AM
Dear Subimal, congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest with this amazing work of art. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 1/26/2020 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on a great win my friend!;)
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Date: 9/2/2019 1:26:00 PM
Congrats Subimal for a wonderful write with an enjoyable refrain, a worthy shared first place winner!
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Date: 8/31/2019 2:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:58:00 AM
EXCELLENT. BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP Regards. I have not seen the contest,
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Date: 8/29/2019 9:55:00 PM
Yet another masterpiece from a great poet. Congrats.. Keep creating such beautiful poetry
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:04:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation.
Date: 8/29/2019 3:52:00 PM
I love the flow of your lines as delves between the verses, -- amazing piece and my compliments oh your honored placement ~ Aloha William
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:05:00 AM
Many thanks, William for your visit and for beautiful comments.
Date: 8/29/2019 3:48:00 PM
I liked your idea for a refrain, and constant reminder if only they knew... The rhymes and flow was very good.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:05:00 AM
Thank you SS for the placement and your encouraging comments.
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