Bereft

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Date written: 03/27/2024

In a roaring ocean of grief, she plunged in. A widow, she's a hodgepodge of emotions; Caged all alone in melancholy's dungeon. Day in, day out she's going through the motions. Bereft, her composure is barely intact. In mourning; a shell fragmenting on impact. The loss of her spouse has left her in tatters. Quite feeble, a fragile glass that could shatter.

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Hiba Junaid

Date: 7/6/2024 11:12:00 AM

the loss must be unbearable for all widows and widowers. i hope they find peace. a deeply evocative piece.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/27/2024 1:30:00 PM

This is such a poignant and deeply emptive poem dead EI, i felt the loss and grief that you’ve described here so seamlessly, caged all alone in melancholy. What a profound way to describe it all! I felt this poem! And youv made this form look so easy to do too! Love it’ best wishes for the contest

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2024 5:18:00 AM

That is a heavy loss to bear--emotions well conveyed, Edward--in this difficult to execute form..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2024 5:24:00 AM

Thank you very much for your comments and visit, Vijay:-)

Tom Woody

Date: 3/27/2024 5:11:00 AM

This could describe so many, widowers too. Nicely done

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2024 5:17:00 AM

Yep, true indeed! Thanks for dropping by, Tom:-)