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As I Watch The Waves Crash Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Anoucheka Gangabissoon. Date: 10/14/2023

Here I am in a place so familiar; I've transported myself To a serene distant shore With periwinkle blue skies Hovering above my head. It's soothingly tranquil here. The sights and sounds are captivating! I hear faint mellifluous bird songs, Incessantly murmuring zephyr And the sounds of crashing waves. I watch the waves crash As I inhale the misty sea air; I feel it on my skin, but alas, It's not the same without you this time. As I watch the waves crash yonder, Exploding sky-high on jagged rocks, My mind holds only thoughts of you. We've waded into this diaphanous, Knee-deep shallows together. We stamped our footprints on these white sands Not so long ago. I feel the paradise blues Because I desperately miss you And wish you were here. Isn't this haven made for lovers anymore? This peaceful shore would be heaven Only if you were here Chasing the afternoon sun with me. Despite it's beauty, it's the loneliest place. Nature blows a sad trombone As I watch the waves crash

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Date: 10/15/2023 9:20:00 PM
A poem of deep longing ringing with a note of melancholy. The images you have created are so beautiful. Reading this, I feel it has a vague resembalce of Matthew Arnold's Dover Beach. Into my FAVE.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/16/2023 2:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and fave, Valsa:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:07:00 AM
Splendid images ruminating in memories. Forlorn and joyful beautifully blended.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/15/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 10/15/2023 5:59:00 AM
Wistful wishes saturate your lines as if the poet’s tears were falling on parchment. Very soulful, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/21/2023 3:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lin:-) Most obliged.

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