Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Writing Challenge - Beautiful or Broken words - Poetry Contest. Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 08/23/2023 (Yalto)

Beautiful

what could be
     more beautiful
          than this?
               your eyes smiling
                    each time they meet mine,
                          your prolonged
                              caress...

ever so
     tightly;
          or is it
                just the way
                     our love is? so pure;
                          nothing can destroy it.
                               'tis...

a beautiful thing!

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Constance La France September 10, 2023 at 11:58 PM Edward, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the creative layout, Constance

Christuraj Alex August 26, 2023 at 9:29 PM "your prolonged caress..." Greatest beautiful thing. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh August 27, 2023 at 1:16 PM Thank you very much as always, Christuraj:-)

Paula Goldsmith August 26, 2023 at 2:32 PM Congratulations on your win. I love your line "your eyes smiling each time they meet mine, " So Lovely... Have a great day............ Edward Ibeh August 26, 2023 at 2:56 PM Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Hiya Sharma August 26, 2023 at 9:13 AM Such a blissfully romantic and magical poem that swirls in the ambience of beautiful love... So gorgeously crafted.. Edward Ibeh August 26, 2023 at 11:12 AM Thank you very much, Hiya:-)

Vijay Pandit August 23, 2023 at 2:02 PM So romantic and beautiful! Edward Ibeh August 23, 2023 at 9:23 PM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Speaks Volumes August 23, 2023 at 12:13 PM Yup you are right, Cant think of anything more beautiful. . Best wishes from SV Edward Ibeh August 23, 2023 at 9:25 PM Thank you very much, SV:-)