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broken angel----

fear encompasses me and i am left forsaken,
drowning in the taste of yesterday’s regret-
i’ve loved and lost midnight stars,
been shadowed by remorse for what i did not do.

so why do i even try?
what is left of me cannot be saved
and all not forgotten will never be forgiven.
i feel the moon stumbling upon my dreams,
sense the magic of death when i’ve lost my way.

for i shall see no more of you-
i shall not be given a reason to hate;
you’ve given me the woe of a thousand tears,
given anxious thoughts that lead to scars.

             but my scars are shared with many,
                            they all feel my sorrow and hold me tight-
        i’ve seen the way they look at me,
                        like a broken angel longing for the light.

Copyright © Lu Loo | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 1/4/2023 10:48:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Date: 12/3/2022 7:18:00 AM

A gripping poem, Lu loo, missing you very much:)
Date: 9/20/2022 9:38:00 PM

A sad write and very true about not forgetting is to never forgive… :)