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I Wish I Had Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Unseeking Seeker. Date written: 03/23/2024
I wish I had... the power to change a broken man's circumstances. I'd flip his dim world back downside up, add colors and rays of sunshine to it, and keep Lady Luck smiling at him. I'd erase his misfortune and pull him back up by his bootstraps. I wish I had... the unsullied innocence of a child; wide-eyed curiosity, a complete absence of guile, unblemished by transgression, brimming with vernal exuberance; oh, it's like being reborn! I wish I had... the ability to resurrect the dead. I'd bring back my father and say to him ONE thing I wish I've said in his living years, and that is..."Dad, I love you!" He knew I loved him, you see. I showed him so many times and in so many different ways, but alas, I never told him so.

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Date: 3/31/2024 3:25:00 AM
I really felt this one Edward, my father was never really a father to me, but he was in his own way.. he left not speaking to me for four years.. we never go to say goodbye, but I say by his death bed for five days.. he couldnt talk or move, but he grabbed my hand and placed it on his lips, which for me was forgiveness....
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Date: 3/24/2024 5:56:00 AM
A graceful poem, Edward. Such endearing sentiments you convey.
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:38:00 PM
Edward, Astounding verse. "I wish I had", so much power in these words. Wish I had three more to give to make all yours come true. -Richard
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 12:44:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback and visit, Richard:-) God bless.

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