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Yellow, Yearn, Yet, Yesterday Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 04/18/2024

One never knows whether indecisive and hypocritical folks are coming or going, whether the face they wear is true or false. They say one thing yet do another. They swear up and down its all love, yet their words and deeds indicate otherwise. They assure you they'd be there for you, yet they leave you stranded in the cold. One promised to never break your heart, yet here you are, in pieces. Why do they do this? Are you just as confused as I am? Is it human nature? indecisive folks toughest puzzle to solve, yet... a confusing bunch

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Date: 4/22/2024 6:04:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this powerful poem, Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2024 3:11:00 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 4/21/2024 8:07:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations! I enjoyed reading this one. I like the way you presented it. Very creative. Sara K
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/21/2024 12:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 4/19/2024 12:28:00 PM
- Enjoy your lines, Edward ... a great poem :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/20/2024 5:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 4/19/2024 10:42:00 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Yet" Haibun write again. Have a great weekend with your win......................
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:24:00 AM
Thanks again, Paula:-)
Date: 4/18/2024 1:30:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Yet" Haibun write. I still do not understand people/guess I never will. "Good Luck" Enjoy your day writing away.............
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 4/18/2024 9:56:00 AM
Music to my ears, Edward, a great entry! Borderline, contradictory, teetering. Many make up their minds, by policies they endorse (no taxes, keep immigrants out, etc.) love or not this makes up their minds! That's where pietism begins. Share and be kind, we’re taught as kids, but society teaches ‘get all you can’ no matter the consequences, who you hurt. Hypocrisy is the coin of the realm and that’s unfortunate.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/18/2024 10:30:00 AM
Is it any wonder why people don't like or trust politicians? You've described them fittingly, Anaya:-) Thanks for the visit, my friend.
Date: 4/18/2024 7:55:00 AM
Can be confusing and annoying. Now some make up their mind but in slow mode…lol. I enjoyed your haibun, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/18/2024 10:32:00 AM
Tell me about it, Kim! lol. Thanks for dropping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend.

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